影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-09-23 03:12:51 Post subject: 七律。学诗有怀 |
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七律。学诗有怀
世相纷呈难定尺，诗书了性愧无才。
勤疏自问破三载，多少为期悟一回。
枕笔常听窗外夜，通灵不忘水中台。
是高是远皆缘月，栩栩如生入梦来。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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| Posted: 2011-09-24 01:46:53 Post subject: |
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临屏步韵和《学诗有怀》（新韵）
百态人生无定尺，吟诗悟性不成才。
三伏难忘书舟载，四处求学车马回。
提笔点成秋果夜，读书融化桂花台。
浅深长短莫谈月，痴念重情移梦来。 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2011-09-24 03:05:10 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑版临屏赐和
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-09-24 04:32:33 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳，欣赏有得。向二位问好。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-09-24 05:53:58 Post subject: |
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| 俱有作诗心得。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-09-24 06:09:38 Post subject: |
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“枕笔常听窗外月”，“痴念重情移梦来”
二位詩情已近痴！问二位秋安！
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2011-10-11 17:34:48 Post subject: |
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诗怀通灵，栩栩如生！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2011-10-13 19:06:03 Post subject: |
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勤疏自问破三载，多少为期悟一回。
枕笔常听窗外夜，通灵不忘水中台。
艰辛如许，精神享受如许！ |
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