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PostPosted: 2011-09-22 07:44:55    Post subject: 完形 Reply with quote

完形

他進來搜索線索、一枝鋼筆尚未合上
筆尖處淌著一攤墨漬、滲透了、揉皺
          、了的方格紙 
已乾了的墨水在紙的左邊邊緣又向下
方走了半吋、
   黏固的一條線、緊拉著桌面
書桌上一條紙船、
   七八本書、橫七豎八

  她 可能上哪兒去了?
   一本翻開的書中間
   有一頁筆直地立著

他貼近那一頁左思右想、感覺所有的
傢俱都靠上來、有秘密、而故作鎮定
將筆合起詩、似聽到、屋子嘆了口氣
像極她的氣息、沒有字音母音的氣息
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PostPosted: 2011-09-22 10:05:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

有趣的一首.
將筆合起詩(时?)、似聽到、屋子嘆了口氣
像極她的氣息、沒有字(子?)音母音的氣息
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PostPosted: 2011-09-22 10:54:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

今天股市又大跌, 聽著新聞,
打得快了, 沒功夫檢查, 確實兩個筆誤.


謝謝!
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