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黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-09-04 17:39:19 Post subject: 七律致蜀中友人

七律致蜀中友人锦城秋色似春光遥祝愈君寿且康漫步庭前牵爱犬闲倚窗下賞斜阳枕边常伴书三卷几上专评稿数张自乐达观征痼疾山高水远树苍苍 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

连南河
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Location: Toronto
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Posted: 2011-09-04 19:02:38 Post subject:

锦城秋色似春光闲倚窗下賞斜阳枕边常伴书三卷山高水远树苍苍长周末快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posts: 3301
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Posted: 2011-09-05 04:46:19 Post subject:

谢谢南河賞读，祝你全家长周末愉快！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2011-09-05 14:56:01 Post subject:

山高水远，友情常在。

黄洋界
探花

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Posts: 3301
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Posted: 2011-09-05 15:55:34 Post subject:

謝庆宏评阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

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Posted: 2011-09-05 18:06:19 Post subject:

黄兄好诗。呵呵，寿且康，诗眼也。拜读！

笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2011-09-06 02:54:59 Post subject:

问好黄老师！这网有些小问题，今天终于上上了。情真意切，长者关爱！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-09-06 16:26:51 Post subject:

謝冰清，笑聊评阅。问好二位！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-09-07 04:55:17 Post subject:

纵使隔重洋，友谊情更长。黄老师是重情的啊！ _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-09-07 15:03:20 Post subject:

謝恢宗兄勉励！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-08 02:44:30 Post subject:

问候黄老师！祝中秋佳节愉快！

孟冲之
童生

Joined: 29 Jul 2010
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Posted: 2011-09-11 07:27:18 Post subject:

黄老康健！中秋快乐！ _________________ 不以心捐道,不以人胜天

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-09-11 14:07:11 Post subject:

谢谢祝福，祝中秋节阖家快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-12 21:11:27 Post subject:

读黄老师诗，就是欣赏“画”，中两联多么形象啊！再赏！问候并致秋祺！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-09-13 17:37:51 Post subject:

謝笑聊兄再次鼓励，詩贵形象而忌空泛，自当努力为之。顺祝秋祺！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-09-14 10:29:36 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七律致蜀中友人
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漫步庭前牵爱犬闲倚窗下賞斜阳
枕边常伴书三卷几上专评稿数张

这是梦寐以求的生活啊，问候黄老师。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2011-09-14 11:56:00 Post subject:

秋叶已开始享受这样的生活了，更复何求？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-09-14 20:09:13 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

秋叶已开始享受这样的生活了，更复何求？

黄老师，我是：
急步庭前除野草，登高房顶修渠边。
东篱种菜锄一把，屏上打油诗数篇。
Laughing

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-09-15 16:40:31 Post subject:

好啊！秋叶的趣味人生！信手拈来，皆成佳章。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-09-16 14:43:49 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

好啊！秋叶的趣味人生！
信手拈来，皆成佳章。

谢谢黄老师，那是生活写实啊，改了一句。

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