影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-09-10 05:05:15 Post subject: 七律•嫦娥（新韵） |
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七律•嫦娥（新韵）
不似尧时相遇初，青山绿水小湖居。
广寒宫寂听伐桂，玉兔心灵伴捣蜍。
耻见人间结豆蔻，空回梦里赏芙蕖。
花前曾许双飞誓，留待他生比目鱼。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-09-10 06:11:22 Post subject: |
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| 有新意。寒水兄中秋节快乐！ |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-09-10 08:02:08 Post subject: |
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花前曾许雙飞誓，留待他生比目鱼。
此情绵绵无绝期而留待他生，情悥綿邈。欣赏！
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2011-09-11 02:33:55 Post subject: |
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情谊之深，今生尚且远远不够，留待他生、、、
欣赏！ |
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影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
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| Posted: 2011-09-12 03:27:26 Post subject: |
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朋友们中秋快乐
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2011-09-12 06:23:02 Post subject: |
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| 深婉好诗。问好，祝福！ |
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