笑聊
探花
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 Posted: 2011-09-07 00:15:18 Post subject: （原创）七律-中秋有感叠韵和迈五兄 |
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问好！再次谢谢迈五兄赐诗指导！
兄诗古喻今，弟自愧不如，只得勉强努力再和：
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圆月中秋诱桂香，酸甜苦辣己亲尝。
五湖水淡无忧日？四海龙腾有潜章！
未敢人前装不见，焉能背后发骚狂？
庙堂疏远难储德，劳碌民心应为纲。
附迈五兄原玉：
影扫尘阶苑桂香，先忧后乐又谁尝。
洞庭湖水宽无日，得月楼人杂有章。
莫道沉浮今不见，眼前贫富也犹狂。
路闻司马曾留德，立晋何劳汉室纲。 |
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-09-07 05:01:47 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳，十分欣赏。
问笑聊老师好。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
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| Posted: 2011-09-07 07:59:51 Post subject: |
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| 中秋赏桂，赋诗忧国。 |
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黄洋界
探花
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| Posted: 2011-09-07 15:28:36 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳，欣赏！并祝中秋节愉快！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2011-09-08 02:52:18 Post subject: |
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| 胡恢宗 wrote: |
唱和俱佳，十分欣赏。
问笑聊老师好。 |
问候恢宗兄！谢谢点评鼓励！顺致佳节快乐！
等这里网站正常后，同恢宗兄唱和一番。 |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2011-09-08 02:54:16 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 中秋赏桂，赋诗忧国。 |
说到忧国忧民，庆宏兄当仁不让。问好！顺致佳节快乐！ |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2011-09-08 02:55:44 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 唱和俱佳，欣赏！并祝中秋节愉快！ |
问候黄老师！谢谢点评鼓励！顺致佳节快乐！ |
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