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歸
戀海
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PostPosted: 2011-08-14 14:45:32    Post subject: 歸 Reply with quote
七月
打開的門扉
歸來的好兄弟們
是否有你


如果沒有你
我仍拜祭虔誠
你在天上
我在人間
中間有一尾魚
輕輕地游過想念距離
被我無心釣起
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低处的迷雾
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PostPosted: 2011-08-19 15:55:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
结尾很用心很生动。
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写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191
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东北诗弦
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PostPosted: 2011-09-06 21:09:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
中間有一尾魚
輕輕地游過想念距離
被我無心釣起
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但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2011-09-07 02:05:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
最后一句也不好理解。 Very Happy
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杯中冲浪.披履而行
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戀海
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PostPosted: 2011-09-07 16:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
低处的迷雾 wrote:
结尾很用心很生动。


問好詩友
謝謝回應

亦問好東北詩弦詩友
謝謝對於小弟詩作的關愛
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PostPosted: 2011-09-07 16:17:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
最后一句也不好理解。 Very Happy


問好杯中沖浪詩友

中國人講魚雁往返
魚的意象
代表著一種訊息
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