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西江月岸品昆虫

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-09-04 01:32:51 Post subject: 西江月岸品昆虫

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Posted: 2011-09-04 02:39:51 Post subject:

恢宗兄昆虫四咏功力可见，尤以蚂蚁为最！

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Posted: 2011-09-05 18:56:29 Post subject:

恢宗兄运笔轻松流畅，状物神形兼备。学习了！

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Posted: 2011-09-06 00:06:03 Post subject:

咏物之作，读之余味。

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Posted: 2011-09-06 07:59:11 Post subject:

十分生动传神。

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Posted: 2011-09-06 16:37:10 Post subject:

吟咏小昆虫，赞其大智慧。欣赏！问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-09-07 05:08:09 Post subject:

谢笑聊老师谬赞。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-09-07 05:10:46 Post subject:

谢冰清老师鼓励。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-09-07 05:16:06 Post subject:

老山兄也在讲客气话，对不足之处就不讲，太不够意思啦！向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-09-07 05:17:59 Post subject:

谢庆宏老师雅评。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-09-07 05:20:27 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师勉励。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-09-08 02:39:44 Post subject:

问候恢宗兄！祝中秋佳节愉快！

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Posted: 2011-09-19 02:28:04 Post subject:

谢笑聊老师的祝福。迟复为歉； _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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