笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-01 05:37:40 Post subject: (原创)鹧鸪天-清凉夏夜之咏史 |
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文/笑聊
赤壁临风谁与痴?冲天白浪笑君知。
英雄不过江流水,肖小唯能敷衍时。
观史册,献文辞。春秋妙笔画容迟。
夜空凉爽心胸乱,泼墨难临当晚诗。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-01 12:30:19 Post subject: |
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赤壁临风,感慨多多。问好笑聊兄! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2011-09-01 13:39:04 Post subject: |
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赤壁怀古,笔墨难尽。
有机会能大江临风赋诗抒怀,真是人生一大快事。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-03 01:02:12 Post subject: |
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问好黄老师!
深谢老师点评!
很难上网,今天终于进来了。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-03 01:05:19 Post subject: |
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问好庆宏兄!
赤壁临风,笔墨难尽!、、、 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-04 01:44:22 Post subject: |
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夏夜观史,自有风趣。问好笶聊兄。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-04 02:31:23 Post subject: |
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胡恢宗 wrote: |
夏夜观史,自有风趣。问好笶聊兄。 |
游戏之作与恢宗兄同乐!问好。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-05 18:47:59 Post subject: |
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喜读笑聊君咏史之作。
可见襟怀和识见,呵呵! |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
老山Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-06 00:01:10 Post subject: |
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赤壁临风,妙笔抒怀,学习了。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-06 03:18:59 Post subject: |
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问好冰清老师!好久不见,已回加国?
赤壁临风是虚,咏史是实。面对现实,不无感慨,徒发书生意气而已。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-09-06 03:28:34 Post subject: |
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问好老山兄!谢谢雅语鼓励! |
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