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七绝夏日眷聚有怀

冰清
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Posted: 2011-07-18 08:18:46 Post subject: 七绝夏日眷聚有怀

七绝夏日眷聚有怀之一年年堪忍到今时，梦里相迎觅小诗。风月西楼仍似旧，路蹊草色不胜披。之二晴妆雨抹俏芙蓉，风送池塘艳艳红。欲问婆娑何絮语? 情羁无奈小桥东。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-07-18 12:40:30 Post subject:

感情细腻，即景即情，情景交融处，眷聚富情怀。冰清夏安！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-07-18 12:48:55 Post subject:

柔情似水，温婉感人。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-07-18 13:14:00 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

感情细腻，即景即情，情景交融处，眷聚富情怀。
冰清夏安！

黄兄，这凝情挥之不去啊！
问候夏安。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-07-18 13:16:11 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

柔情似水，温婉感人。

谢谢庆弘。

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-19 02:10:32 Post subject:

思如长江流水；情却凝固似初！问好冰清老师！

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Posted: 2011-07-19 16:53:09 Post subject: 温婉感人

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Posted: 2011-07-21 03:25:06 Post subject:

思如扬子水，情却固源头。向老师问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-29 04:29:17 Post subject:

如此情感，让人羡艳；如此美词，让人陶醉！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-08-06 18:34:48 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

思如长江流水；情却凝固似初！

问好冰清老师！

谢谢笑版！远握！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-08-06 18:39:03 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

白水，图虽不见，你的电话却让我激动不已！谢谢。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-08-06 18:44:49 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

思如扬子水，情却固源头。
向老师问好。

谢谢恢宗兄。问候您和您夫人。

冰清
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Posted: 2011-08-06 18:50:14 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

如此情感，让人羡艳；如此美词，让人陶醉！

谢运刚君。谢谢您给我送来夏日的清凉

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Posted: 2011-08-08 21:59:33 Post subject:

欣赏，向大家问安！

连南河
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Posted: 2011-08-21 08:20:45 Post subject:

冰心玉壶清风徐徐 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-09-08 03:00:46 Post subject:

问候冰清老师！顺致中秋愉快！

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Posted: 2011-09-09 16:19:13 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

七绝夏日眷聚有怀

之一

年年堪忍到今时，梦里相迎觅小诗。
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冰清老师，感人之作，祝中秋快乐！

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