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水调歌头 · 亮剑

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-07-24 02:54:58 Post subject: 水调歌头 · 亮剑

水调歌头 · 亮剑甲午败黄海，难愈百年伤。海疆一望无际，岂可失金汤。既有星罗礁岛，又有无穷珍宝，应作大文章。共识遍朝野，保海即安邦。试飞弹，兴铁甲，核潜舱。不应有惧，朋友何必怨锋芒。航线通行无阻，开发资源联手，同结郁金香。亮剑纯防卫，世上有豺狼。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-24 03:34:04 Post subject:

恢宗兄好词！只不过百姓空有“亮剑”精神，不说也罢。

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Posted: 2011-07-24 03:57:24 Post subject:

恢宗老师词，铮铮有声。

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Posted: 2011-07-24 06:29:27 Post subject:

扬正义之声，亮镇邪之剑。好词！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-07-24 17:09:39 Post subject:

附上旧作和恢宗老师：五绝远洋缉海盗 2009年10月30日陈汤豪迈语，万里镇匈奴。大海波涛路，何时变坦途？闻索马里海盗骑劫中国货轮，犹思汉名将陈汤豪语“明犯强汉者，虽远必诛！”

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Posted: 2011-07-27 00:01:22 Post subject:

谢笑聊老师点评。民气也很重要。“五、四”运动就是民心、民气，不可抗拒啊！向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-27 00:03:32 Post subject:

谢庆宏老师阅赏并问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-27 00:05:31 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师阅评并问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-27 00:15:51 Post subject:

谢庆宏老师和诗。有人说南沙太远，戍守补给困难，所以才说“应作大文章”。不知航母何时才能下水？ _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-28 03:51:11 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

谢笑聊老师点评。民气也很重要。“五、四”运动就是民心、民气，不可抗拒啊！
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恢宗兄说的对，我也知道这个“水能载舟亦能覆舟”的道理。只是看看现实就不想多说了，说了也无用。只因你我人微言轻啊！

问好兄台！夏安。

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