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西江月下种园蔬
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PostPosted: 2011-07-21 06:52:46    Post subject: 西江月下种园蔬 Reply with quote

西江月 · 韭菜
始若麦芽探首,继如兰蕙迎春。风中雨际绿披身,欲与群芳叫阵。
献出一丛青秀,带来几缕纯真。食疗品味任由人,碎骨粉身无恨。


少是青锋挺拨,老来素帐重围。家贫徒裹一单衣。兄弟抱团就位。
是日烹调征召,顷间劳燕分飞。哥哥成片弟成泥。餐桌凭添美味。

芹菜
远看一丛翠绿,近闻半缕清香。通身玉质美人妆,一副可人模样。
上席则成高贵,入乡却视平常。晕烹素炒耐人尝,总是当成绝唱。

苦瓜
亲见菜农窘困,因而嫩面沧桑。酿成苦素亦悠长。那得潘安长相。
虽说钟魁外貌,却有菩萨心肠。餐中祛火暑难伤。味美情深难忘。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-21 10:55:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

月下种园蔬,好个园兿翁!众菜齐拱首,謝君赞誉功。

恢宗兄为韭菜,蒜,芹菜,苦瓜代言,惟妙惟肖,
形神兼备,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2011-07-21 12:59:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

色香味雅俱全。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-22 05:20:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗 wrote:
西江月 · 韭菜
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随手写就词几首-新鲜
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PostPosted: 2011-07-24 02:38:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢黄洋界老师阅评。向您问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-24 02:40:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢庆宏老师阅赏。向您问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-07-24 02:43:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢笑聊老师阅读。游戏之作,让方家见笑。向您问好
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