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七绝君臣（二）

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Posted: 2011-07-13 08:02:32 Post subject: 七绝君臣（二）

七绝君臣（二）登坛拜将请韩信，三顾茅庐会孔明。征战只因缺将帅，一成帝业便无情。新改：七绝君臣（二）登坛拜将显心诚，三顾茅庐会孔明。征战只因缺将帅，一成帝业便无情。

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Posted: 2011-07-13 11:49:22 Post subject:

观今宜鉴古，借故以讽今。历史重演了多少悲剧！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-07-13 12:59:04 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

观今宜鉴古，借故以讽今。
历史重演了多少悲剧！

谢谢黄老师雅评。

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Posted: 2011-07-13 13:27:10 Post subject:

这种现象不仅仅于君王，更显现于人性的悲哀

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Posted: 2011-07-13 16:25:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这种现象不仅仅于君王，更显现于人性的悲哀

谢谢白水兄雅评。

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Posted: 2011-07-13 20:23:09 Post subject:

过河拆桥，比比皆是。哀哉！

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Posted: 2011-07-13 20:30:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝君臣（二）
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问好！

庆宏兄这首诗道出了一个普遍真理：狡兔死，走狗烹；高鸟尽，良弓藏。但也有列外，如李世民这样的皇帝。历史是面镜子，多少事在重复演绎着，无休无止！

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Posted: 2011-07-14 08:01:20 Post subject:

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过河拆桥，比比皆是。哀哉！

谢谢sliu6诗友评阅。

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Posted: 2011-07-14 08:02:38 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝君臣（二）
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笑聊兄所言极是。史上总是昏君暴君多于明君。

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Posted: 2011-07-14 14:03:11 Post subject:

来凑热闹,学习并问好。其实,中华文化也有非常优秀的一面.比方说<易经>就是一部关于事物发展变化的哲学,我个人只能理解一点皮毛. 还有日本人,韩国人喜欢的<孙子兵法>,'中医药'.据说四大发明，元青花的概念都是西方人总结出来的... 好像联合国秘书长潘基文先生在连任答谢致词中曾引用过老子的话：利而不害，为而不争。我觉得中间加上，用而不废就更精辟了。只是现代文明远没有达到可以不争的境界。这里每到夏天(有重大赛事时)常能看到小车上插着五颜六色的国旗，很养眼。我又在瞎说，恕罪。

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Posted: 2011-07-14 18:44:36 Post subject:

新改：七绝君臣（二）登坛拜将显心诚，三顾茅庐会孔明。征战只因缺将帅，一成帝业便无情。

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Posted: 2011-07-14 21:02:10 Post subject:

君与臣，就是这样。以前看个片子，有这么两句：你有你的来时去时路，我若同行命运如何？背景是大宋开国的赵哥哥给自小与他打天下的郑兄弟借酒醉之机砍了。还有历代帝王，自己那么多兄弟硬要你砍我我砍你，最后剩下一个，方得以称“寡”人。 _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

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Posted: 2011-07-15 08:03:01 Post subject:

金沙浪子 wrote:

君与臣，就是这样。以前看个片子，有这么两句：你有你的来时去时路，我若同行命运如何？背景是大宋开国的赵哥哥给自小与他打天下的郑兄弟借酒醉之机砍了。还有历代帝王，自己那么多兄弟硬要你砍我我砍你，最后剩下一个，方得以称“寡”人。

谢谢浪子兄点评。

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Posted: 2011-07-16 02:37:18 Post subject:

我欣赏前一前首，韩信才是最典型的例子，孔明不能作代表。向庆宏老师问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 04:16:07 Post subject:

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我欣赏前一前首，韩信才是最典型的例子，孔明不能作代表。
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谢谢恢宗老师雅评讨论。登坛拜将显心诚，仍是说刘邦登坛拜将的故事。刘备孔明虽为史上君臣和睦典范，是因为刘备死前还未能成功一统天下。其实刘备也是位心机很深的君王，比如和曹操煮酒论英雄时借雷声掩惊慌，长坂坡当赵云面掷阿斗，临死前用“让孔明可以取代阿斗”的话来试探孔明等等。如果刘备死前能够成功一统天下成就帝业，能否和关张继续亲如兄弟和孔明如鱼水君臣就很难说。刘备在蜀汉割据称帝后就已经刚愎自用不听忠言了，何况一统天下之后？

中国历史上统一天下后能够善待功臣开国君王为数很少，也就是汉光武刘秀，唐太宗李世民及宋太祖赵匡胤等几人而已。

甚至叶剑英元帅都写有借古喻今的诗句“忽忆刘亭长，苍凉唱大风”来暗指现代的君臣悲剧。

问恢宗老师好，多保重！

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Posted: 2011-07-18 07:48:32 Post subject:

问候庆弘；欣赏胆识。

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Posted: 2011-07-18 08:02:16 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

问候庆弘；欣赏胆识。

谢谢并问好冰清老师。

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Posted: 2011-07-19 02:39:27 Post subject:

再读庆宏兄诗，仍感震撼。说明了诗的感染力很强！向庆宏兄学习写诗的深度并问夏安！

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