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胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-07-14 07:14:14 Post subject: 西江月 · 婉娩年华

西江月 · 婉娩年华岁月随烟而淡，光波似水如绸。平常之处见温柔，心结何从起皱？捧卷无由寂寞，忘机那得烦愁。年前瑞雪几回眸，似锦繁花等侯。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-14 16:53:27 Post subject:

年华如电，感慨而歌。欣赏首联之准确描摹与对仗工整。

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Posted: 2011-07-14 18:00:20 Post subject:

如此婉娩年华，定然青春永驻。恢宗兄当之。 “捧卷无由寂寞，忘机那得烦愁”，高境界！好联! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-07-14 18:40:31 Post subject:

感人之作。

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Posted: 2011-07-15 03:28:26 Post subject:

西江月 · 婉娩年华岁月随烟而淡，光波似水如绸。平常之处见温柔，心结何从起皱？捧卷无由寂寞，忘机那得烦愁。年前瑞雪几回眸，似锦繁花等侯。平常之处见温柔，心结何从起皱？欣赏平常心、温柔心；何来心结？！何从起皱？！恢宗兄好心态！

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Posted: 2011-07-16 02:38:51 Post subject:

年前瑞雪几回眸，似锦繁花等侯。 --真好~

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Posted: 2011-07-16 03:12:43 Post subject:

谢莹雪老师雅鉴。呆在医院，精神压抑。后来一想，目前状况，只是暂时的，局部的，不应该失去本来面貌。如是就写了这首词，以求自我解脱。现在情绪好多了，有空就上网。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 03:16:57 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师阅。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 03:18:45 Post subject:

谢庆宏者师阅评。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 03:22:10 Post subject:

谢笑聊老师阅评。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 03:23:58 Post subject:

谢s君欣赏。向您问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-16 22:32:38 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

谢莹雪老师雅鉴。呆在医院，精神压抑。后来一想，目前状况，只是暂时的，局部的，不应该失去本来面貌。
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