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《今晚我也很愉快》
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2011-07-13 06:37:38    Post subject: 《今晚我也很愉快》 Reply with quote

《今晚我也很愉快》

似乎听到赶车人愉快的鞭声
比鞭声更愉快的口哨
似乎看到麻雀刚刚登过的枝头
那样愉快地颤动

水渠比水更愉快地痉挛着
歌声比姑娘更愉快地痉挛着
灶膛比夕阳更兴奋
母亲比灶膛里的火更兴奋

没人知道百里之外的村庄
是否诞生了高考状元
没人知道山坳里又有5名矿工
幸运地获救升井

今晚,我也很愉快
就像我俩漫步的山岗
盲目地升起一团团雾气

《故居》

谁给我雪给我雨给我雷声
给我江河给我湖泊给我渔郎
谁给我卑微的父母和老实的兄弟
给我美丽的姐妹又纷纷夭折
谁给我歌声又给我耳聋
给我明眸皓齿又给我破败土墙

在小镇一角我踮起脚跟
在学校、店铺、住家门前平伸双手
不耸肩不憨笑不报姓名不提任何要求
故居,我离你仅仅几十米远
不再向前不再向前不再
向前

《苦涩的》

现在是深夜
现在是露珠滴入花朵的时刻
现在是你的喊声砸破月亮的时刻

我是苦涩的
园子里的瓜秧是苦涩的
母亲和爱人是苦涩的

水是苦涩的
村庄是苦涩的
我还有多少距离和时间
对苦涩进行修饰和赞美啊

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山城子
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PostPosted: 2011-07-14 18:24:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

看到苦涩——觉得上面的愉快,好像都是某个修辞格了!
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2011-07-20 16:57:38    Post subject: heh Reply with quote

呵呵。发在一起,是不对应。
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