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秋蟬

劉金雄
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Joined: 28 Aug 2009
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Posted: 2011-06-27 18:11:57 Post subject: 秋蟬

一聲蟬鳴竟有一個夏天這麼長循著聲音找只看見爬在樹上幾隻假動作的蟬蛻風吹過空心的蛻無聲抖了一下掉落時仍維持著夏天的姿勢

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2011-07-04 17:11:00 Post subject:

顶上去看。我天天在林子里逮知了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

叶英儿
秀才

Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 577
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2011-07-04 18:02:15 Post subject: 不错，欣赏了。

不错，欣赏了。

劉金雄
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Joined: 28 Aug 2009
Posts: 77
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Posted: 2011-07-06 00:06:43 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

顶上去看。我天天在林子里逮知了

金金詩友：

好愜意的生活!
羨慕了!

金雄問好!

劉金雄
童生

Joined: 28 Aug 2009
Posts: 77
Location: 台灣桃園
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Posted: 2011-07-06 00:07:42 Post subject:

叶英儿 wrote:

不错，欣赏了。

叶英儿詩友：感謝讀詩!

金雄問好!

Lake
举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007
Posts: 1286

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Posted: 2011-07-08 05:48:27 Post subject:

古时秋蝉入诗的很多。喜欢这种新的表达。有种禅味。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

劉金雄
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Joined: 28 Aug 2009
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Posted: 2011-07-08 17:56:25 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

古时秋蝉入诗的很多。喜欢这种新的表达。有种禅味。

Lake詩友：

秋蝉入诗入詞的很多
秋下一心愁
都是悲傷的意味多
我看秋蟬卻有著夏天的味道
穿短袖、吃冰棒的味道

感謝讀詩!
金雄問好!

Lake
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Posted: 2011-07-09 06:28:25 Post subject:

谢谢解析。难得的就是写出新意。问好。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

白水
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Posted: 2011-07-09 17:16:21 Post subject:

好心态

劉金雄
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Posted: 2011-07-15 06:34:10 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

好心态

白水 Moonlight詩友

感謝讀詩!

金雄問好!

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