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荷华媚—雨荷

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-07-08 22:20:39 Post subject: 荷华媚—雨荷

霞衣雨梳韵，神恬淡、又是闲池娇艳。盈盈孤秀丽，凌波自舞，赞深深浅浅。频回眸、宁静微风夜，正素辉倾霜，新巧妆点。芳心纵、付诗句，馨幽浓处溢，清真布满。

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:01:39 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

霞衣雨梳韵，
神恬淡、又是闲池娇艳。
盈盈孤秀丽，凌波自舞，赞深深浅浅。

频回眸、宁静微风夜，
正素辉倾霜，新巧妆点。
芳心纵、付诗句，馨幽浓处溢，清真布满。

赞莹雪好词！

恬淡雨荷，恰清香四溢；
漫天莹雪，如词韵满怀！

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:05:46 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

赞莹雪好词！

恬淡雨荷，恰清香四溢；
漫天莹雪，如词韵满怀！

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Posted: 2011-07-09 03:27:35 Post subject:

神恬淡、又是闲池娇艳。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2011-07-09 04:16:43 Post subject:

清雅幽香。

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Posted: 2011-07-09 04:50:25 Post subject:

闲池雨荷芳心纵！问好莹雪！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-07-09 05:51:51 Post subject:

深深浅浅凌波舞，娇艳盈盈秀丽荷。分外迷人。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-07-09 17:34:58 Post subject:

来读MM

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-07-09 18:53:51 Post subject:

偶就懒一把吧，不一一致谢啦哈！一并谢过前辈、哥哥、姐姐点评和鼓励！（嘻嘻，有弟弟妹妹吗？有的话，也一并谢啦！）

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Posted: 2011-07-09 19:03:11 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

来读MM

等明天去你那版。读JJ Wink

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Posted: 2011-07-10 18:24:25 Post subject:

欣赏莹雪好词

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-07-11 21:57:29 Post subject:

谢谢关注哎呀！人家怎么变成虫虫啦嘿嘿，开个玩笑

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Posted: 2011-07-12 04:28:07 Post subject:

你看，又变回去了。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-07-12 22:22:26 Post subject:

哦，谢谢

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Posted: 2011-07-18 06:08:33 Post subject:

看到莹雪美词，又觉手痒，忍不住临屏和上一首醉花阴-写荷：文/笑聊恬淡雨荷姿艳韵，秀丽凌波俊。风舞碧衣衫，影入仙池，恰是清香近。吟诗总觉清辉隐，任晚凉初吻。不信九天怜，深浅随和，嫩巧添新粉。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-07-21 18:53:39 Post subject:

这几天太忙了，才回来看到，回和一首醉花阴--感荷：闲池弄碧舒幽韵，丽装姿俏俊。丝雨润芳身，顾影清纯，何惧清秋近。静思闹市心归隐，休把西风恨。暂觅九天霞，绘就云衣，墨客诗词衬。

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Posted: 2011-07-22 04:27:31 Post subject: 醉花阴-敬荷

莹雪 wrote:

这几天太忙了，才回来看到，回和一首醉花阴--感荷：
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临屏回和：

文/笑聊（别体）

淤泥无染仙家韵，入世凡尘俊。任雨打风吹，兀自风骚，俏立清辉近。
不甘堕落沉沦隐，焉诉轻轻恨。去杂念纷纷，潇洒闲人，碧玉新颜吻。

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Posted: 2011-07-24 10:10:28 Post subject:

LOTUS BLOOM SHOW！荷的盛会！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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