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原创诗歌《道歉》

低处的迷雾
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Posted: 2011-06-16 22:48:58 Post subject: 原创诗歌《道歉》

《道歉》文低处的迷雾回响着泥浆的身世被塌陷的旧社会盗取越来越凄凉的爱卡在阴森的旧病里泛起的火卦在我心尖画符不可捉摸的白被偏僻的血源照见阴间的门廊用忏悔分开我的虚妄和灰烬我正在暗恋青烟掀动起来的大海我已吞服陌生的光芒我正在幸福那些窖藏的伤口吸回我亲爱的珠宝不是矫情也不是欢喜是被烫死之后对遗骸的敬意和道歉 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-06-16 22:50:47 Post subject:

消灭零回帖。 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-07-01 00:46:34 Post subject:

我正在暗恋青烟掀动起来的大海我已吞服陌生的光芒我正在幸福喜欢这里的诗句，大气有自己的特性 _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2011-07-07 18:57:45 Post subject:

看上半段，有李金发的晦涩与疼痛、节奏漂亮的追求。顶上去看！问好，夏天心情凉爽！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2011-08-04 15:55:44 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

我正在暗恋青烟掀动起来的大海
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谢谢晴宝儿。问候。
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写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-08-04 16:01:10 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

看上半段，有李金发的晦涩与疼痛、节奏漂亮的追求。
...

谢谢金金。问好。
_________________
写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-08-04 16:02:53 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

看上半段，有李金发的晦涩与疼痛、节奏漂亮的追求。
...

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Posted: 2011-08-09 22:45:14 Post subject:

发些新作来啊：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2011-08-10 15:38:36 Post subject: 不错，欣赏了。

不错，欣赏了。

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Posted: 2011-08-19 16:08:08 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

发些新作来啊：）

好的。谢谢金金。问候。
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写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-08-19 16:08:58 Post subject:

叶英儿 wrote:

不错，欣赏了。

谢谢你。问候。
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写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

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Posted: 2011-10-09 04:01:28 Post subject:

时光的生死是记忆决定的~~短短的诗歌蕴匿丰富的经历和内心历程~~ 多来~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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