影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection |
 Posted: 2011-07-02 18:20:54 Post subject: 七律。散步（新韵） |
 |
|
七律。散步（新韵）
堤坝横截浪已空，山凹落日隐霞红。
飞失群鸟入林影，归踏满庭寻月踪。
只道临门三径客，相知添籁九霄风。
一如心跃蝉深鼓，入夜经年上古桐。
_________________
诗无涯。思在线 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2011-07-02 18:42:33 Post subject: |
|
|
| 闲适，最喜这联“只道临门三径客，相知添籁九霄风”。请问是“添籁”还是“天籁”？是输入疏忽了吗？ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection |
| Posted: 2011-07-03 01:38:45 Post subject: |
|
|
| 莹雪 wrote: |
| 闲适，最喜这联“只道临门三径客，相知添籁九霄风”。请问是“添籁”还是“天籁”？是输入疏忽了吗？ |
就是这样的动宾结构啊
_________________
诗无涯。思在线 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
连南河
秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
连南河Collection |
| Posted: 2011-07-03 05:22:45 Post subject: |
|
|
闲适中显深情
我也在"浪已空"的横截堤坝上散步过
_________________
一路雨丝一路风 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
胡恢宗
秀才
Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
| Posted: 2011-07-05 02:06:54 Post subject: |
|
|
先生的闲适，好令我羡慕啊！问好。
_________________
水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Sign in
Album
