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绿色的飘带(诗歌)
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PostPosted: 2011-05-26 20:32:28    Post subject: 绿色的飘带(诗歌) Reply with quote

绿色的飘带
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在五月金色的晨光中
车窗外一闪而过的树木
犹如给沙漠公路
镶上了绿色的飘带
在绿洲正待醒来的怀抱中飘
绵延百余公里的防风阻沙基干林
让采访车此时成为
绿海中游弋的一叶扁舟
在古尔班通古特大漠
我飘动的思绪
追随铿锵有力的步伐
融入浩荡的河流
翻卷绿色的浪波
胡杨、红柳和白杨
生死相依的兄弟
我一次次地走进你的梦里
呼喊你的名字 热泪盈眶
浑黄 曾经多么凝重和苍凉的颜色
被如雪的碱花追逐和驱赶
你以绿铸剑插进沙漠的心脏
把干旱和荒芜踩在脚下
将绿色的云朵高高举过头顶
奏响凛然的生命之歌
半个世纪啊
三代军垦儿女的青春和热血
在你的躯体里淙淙流淌
我听见
嘹亮的军歌依然在耳畔回旋
一片片晶亮的绿叶
迎着金色的阳光
闪烁着不朽的灵魂之光

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PostPosted: 2011-05-27 15:33:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

一片片晶亮的绿叶
迎着金色的阳光
闪烁着不朽的灵魂之光

拜读,问好。
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PostPosted: 2011-06-27 17:32:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师指出诗眼,问好!
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