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七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

冰清
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Posted: 2011-05-19 09:26:40 Post subject: 七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。峰环路转潺潺水，壁峭崖悬鼎鼎钟。花瑞花魂香洁叶，云关云骨劲贞松。回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。

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Posted: 2011-05-19 11:14:23 Post subject:

神游瀛海，幻化游踪，却如亲历。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2011-05-19 16:40:55 Post subject:

谢黄兄雅赏。

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Posted: 2011-05-22 04:53:15 Post subject:

峰环路转潺潺水，壁峭崖悬鼎鼎钟。花瑞花魂香洁叶，云关云骨劲贞松。对杖工整，意象清新。学习。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-06-11 15:08:00 Post subject:

回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。欣赏！

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Posted: 2011-06-11 19:39:56 Post subject:

欣赏胸次崔嵬 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2011-06-22 09:01:01 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

峰环路转潺潺水，壁峭崖悬鼎鼎钟。
...

谢恢宗兄雅赞。
嫂夫人康复么？念念！

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Posted: 2011-06-22 09:07:12 Post subject:

老山 wrote:

回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。
欣赏！

回眸一笑！谢兄雅赏！

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Posted: 2011-06-22 09:09:11 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

欣赏胸次崔嵬

多谢寒水君！

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Posted: 2011-06-22 22:36:24 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。
峰环路转潺潺水，壁峭崖悬鼎鼎钟。
花瑞花魂香洁叶，云关云骨劲贞松。
回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。
...

冰清老师好诗也！大作读来如沐春风，云游山水，赏心悦目，收藏起来，有空多读矣。

回眸待看葱笼处---这里用了过去时和将来时，其中有故事？

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Posted: 2011-06-25 01:54:49 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。
...

问好冰清老师！读君诗如春风拂面，结句特别铿锵有力，学习了。

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Posted: 2011-06-25 02:37:27 Post subject:

拜读冰清老师好律。

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Posted: 2011-06-25 03:10:13 Post subject:

回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。大气，洒脱。欣赏

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-25 06:10:48 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

冰清老师好诗也！大作读来如沐春风，云游山水，赏心悦目，收藏起来，有空多读矣。

回眸待看葱笼处---这里用了过去时和将来时，其中有故事？
...

谢秋斑!

“这里用了过去时和将来时，其中有故事？”

哈哈，秋斑慧眼!

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-25 06:14:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。
...

问好冰清老师！读君诗如春风拂面，结句特别铿锵有力，学习了。

谢笑聊君!
什么时候来“加”? 盼!

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-25 06:23:27 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

拜读冰清老师好律。

谢qinghongh君雅赏!

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-25 06:25:53 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

回眸待看葱笼处，胸次崔嵬一笑中。

大气，洒脱。欣赏

谢谢你，白水

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-06-25 17:39:30 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。
...

问好冰清老师！读君诗如春风拂面，结句特别铿锵有力，学习了。

谢笑聊君!
什么时候来“加”? 盼!

回冰清老师话，拟明年适当时候去拜访师友们。

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-07-07 04:20:29 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

七律往事如烟兄诗见赠回赠一篇和韵以谢

瀛海神游兴意浓，清风伴我远尘踪。
...

问好冰清老师！读君诗如春风拂面，结句特别铿锵有力，学习了。

谢笑聊君!
什么时候来“加”? 盼!

冰清老师夏安！
回老师话，拟明年夏秋之交时拜访师友们。如果随团，可能自由不够；如果私人游，则需担保；如果有团队，邀请学术交流，那就省事了。如何处理到时看吧。

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