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七绝—观牡丹

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秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-21 09:50:12 Post subject: 七绝—观牡丹

七绝—观牡丹上周末与庆宏兄等一行到奥沙华观牡丹，品种繁多，美不胜收，草上一绝记之：瑰艳无心压众芳，满园吐白喷红黄。天香国色临夷域，误把枫林作洛阳。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-06-21 11:49:53 Post subject:

秋叶，庆宏好兴致! 天时地利人勤护，乐把楓园当洛阳。朋友赠我二株菏泽牡丹现长势不错，希望今年或明年能賞好花。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-06-21 15:39:08 Post subject:

诗语优雅，如牡丹在眼前。问夏日安好！

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-06-21 18:17:12 Post subject:

七绝雅，牡丹芳。欣赏！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-22 09:11:38 Post subject:

“无心”，有格也！欣赏秋斑好绝。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-22 22:13:30 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

秋叶，庆宏好兴致!
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谢谢黄老师赏读，我后院也有一棵Festiva Maxima，白色的正开得灿烂呢。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-22 22:17:29 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

诗语优雅，如牡丹在眼前。问夏日安好！

谢谢莹雪，您好像没有写过牡丹的大作，待看啊，问安！

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-22 22:20:39 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

“无心”，有格也！
欣赏秋斑好绝。

冰清老师，久违了，谢谢赞赏，匆匆草就，改了一字，是否好些，望赐教。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-22 22:22:18 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝雅，牡丹芳。欣赏！

谢谢庆宏兄，等你的大作啊。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-06-23 01:30:14 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

诗语优雅，如牡丹在眼前。问夏日安好！

谢谢莹雪，您好像没有写过牡丹的大作，待看啊，问安！

别客气。
我写过牡丹。就是写得不多。您可用鼠标点前一句蓝色字“牡丹”就看到啦。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-06-23 02:21:26 Post subject:

微风酿就千娇面，细雨闲舒百态身。感慨芳菲踪殆尽，抒怀国色影轻临。

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Posted: 2011-06-23 08:03:17 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝雅，牡丹芳。欣赏！

谢谢庆宏兄，等你的大作啊。

眼前有景道不得，秋叶题诗在上头。 Laughing

只好以旧作洛阳牡丹来会秋叶兄的加国牡丹：

七绝洛阳牡丹

牡丹华贵沁芬芳，风骨铮铮藐女皇。
国色天香酬百姓，一朝绽放古都香。

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Posted: 2011-06-24 14:56:38 Post subject:

瑰艳无心压众芳，飞啡吐白喷红黄。天香国色发夷地，误把枫园作洛阳。好诗好兴致！问好秋叶兄。

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Posted: 2011-06-25 03:26:23 Post subject:

来赏唱和

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:44:41 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

微风酿就千娇面，细雨闲舒百态身。
感慨芳菲踪殆尽，抒怀国色影轻临。

微风酿就千娇面，细雨闲舒百态身。
传神之喻，妙！

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:48:12 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝雅，牡丹芳。欣赏！

谢谢庆宏兄，等你的大作啊。

眼前有景道不得，秋叶题诗在上头。 Laughing

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庆宏兄，旧作虽然好，但也不可偷懒也 Very Happy

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:51:22 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

瑰艳无心压众芳，飞啡吐白喷红黄。
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谢谢笑聊赏读，草率之稿，又改了一下，是否自然些？望赐教。

瑰艳无心压众芳，满园吐白喷红黄。
天香国色临夷域，误把枫林作洛阳。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:55:53 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

来赏唱和

谢谢白水兄

冰清
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Posted: 2011-06-25 05:56:05 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

“无心”，有格也！
欣赏秋斑好绝。

冰清老师，久违了，谢谢赞赏，匆匆草就，改了一字，是否好些，望赐教。

瑰艳无心压众芳，满园吐白喷红黄。
天香国色临异域，误把枫林作洛阳。

好! “喷”，特好。激情四溅，呵呵。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-06-25 06:01:26 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

“无心”，有格也！
欣赏秋斑好绝。

冰清老师，久违了，谢谢赞赏，匆匆草就，改了一字，是否好些，望赐教。

瑰艳无心压众芳，满园吐白喷红黄。
...

再谢冰清老师赏读，今天是否到CELIA家，有照片看啊。

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