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鹧鸪天•梅(十首)
田建勋
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PostPosted: 2011-06-18 18:15:36    Post subject: 鹧鸪天•梅(十首) Reply with quote

其一
嫩蕊初含雪一枝,横斜竹底暖风迟。魂飞庾岭诗怀瘦,影落寒塘玉笛痴。
云去后,月来时,酒深酒浅醉休辞。身虽老去心难老,欲寄清香酬远思。
其二
欲破春光意在先,风情占尽写残年。十分琼骨休嫌瘦,满盏冰心未觉寒。
云岭下,玉栏边,一枝楚楚惹人怜。此花非是寻常色,疏影移来梦里看。
其三
寂寞寒宵开玉堂,闻来犹比百花香。人间长忆罗浮近,梦里方知庾岭长。
抛乱绪,引金觞,笛中云水正苍茫。有梅且把柴扉闭,独自窗边画冷芳。
其四
又是层冰积雪时,独开幽谷意痴痴。暗香缕缕成清泪,玉笛声声入酒卮。
叹月影,傍寒池,个中滋味有谁知。纵然身去千年后,魂也相随庾岭西。
其五
红艳亭亭不待春,衔霜当路任埃尘。冬阳欲暖心如火,瘦骨尤清雪是魂。
听玉笛,舞黄昏,纵然月下亦超群。虽非种自瑶台出,傲立寒风不作臣。
其六
谁解清寒慰客尘?亭亭篱畔一枝新。魂来庾岭皆为雪,梦隔罗浮半是云。
吟骨瘦,赏芳薰,空庭相伴度晨昏。江南江北闲愁了,共写风情到玉樽。
其七
月夜归来第五桥,佩环声入楚天遥。红唇未启千行泪,别曲难弹一尺娇。
情脉脉,梦迢迢,纵教无语也魂消。人生若得幽香伴,那怕青丝成二毛。
其八
独处楼台月正明,相逢应与酒相倾。芳心无暇当如雪,玉骨清寒尤似冰。
霜里叹,雪中听,何郎老矣枉多情。诗魂从此随它去,梦里空闻笛几声。
其九
一朵盈盈笑晓风,琼肌胜似小桃红。情多自是余孤瘦,杯浅焉能妆玉容。
情未老,梦难通,人间最苦是相逢。樽前且把仙乡问,家在巫山第几峰?
其十
十弄梅花意未休,黄昏又值月当楼。暗香片片飞如雪,玉骨铮铮弯似虬。
思庾岭,梦罗浮,乡情万里总悠悠。樽前莫拾相思瓣,恐惹新愁叠旧愁。
2011.6.18
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2011-06-18 19:03:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

幽幽妙语,尽显梅姿。
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2011-06-18 19:58:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏雅韵一组。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-06-19 06:53:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

已听梅花三弄,再賞田君十咏。
一题多咏,多角度,多侧面地描写抒情,真不易!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2011-06-22 09:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨瘦情脉脉,芳薰梦迢迢...,

神悟联绵,拜读一一。
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田建勋
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PostPosted: 2011-06-24 00:48:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢诸位老师欣赏!
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2011-06-24 14:18:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

田建勋 wrote:
其一
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梅韵多多十弄真,风光处处乍推春。

欣赏问好!
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