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再见(外一首)
徐志亭
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PostPosted: 2011-06-05 06:39:56    Post subject: 再见(外一首) Reply with quote

再见

它挣扎了几下
蜕下最后一节旧皮
现在,它终于成了一条
全新的蛇了

它抬起头
看着那个陌生的自己
在残风吹拂下
剧烈地抖动

它慢慢转过身
向远方爬去
心中默默地说了声
再见








静慈庵最后一个尼姑
出嫁了。青灯耗不尽夜色
一一熄灭。木鱼声渐远
消失在风里
原本应该清静的地方
这一次,真的
空了
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William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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PostPosted: 2011-06-13 17:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

素描功夫,作者不动声色。
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韩少君
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2011-06-13 21:29:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有回味
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