影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-02 02:07:40 Post subject: 五律•夏心秋(仿作) |
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五律•夏心秋(仿作)
一觉春花梦,夏心何事秋。
夕阳犹堕落,渭水径奔流。
无胆绝周粟,有情冠楚囚。
东湖荷已放,不复少年游。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-02 17:24:41 Post subject: |
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| 首句典雅。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2011-06-03 08:05:32 Post subject: |
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无胆绝周粟,有情冠楚囚。
引人深思。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-03 15:57:01 Post subject: |
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| 寄寓深深! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2011-06-04 04:35:44 Post subject: |
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三位晚上好 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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