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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 14:57:33    Post subject: 空屋自畫像 Reply with quote

空屋自畫像

顏色就是你的詞彙
形狀就是你的句子
明暗就是你的平仄
位置就是你的文章
其它的,沒法說

你先是捨棄了位置
再又去掉了明暗
失去了形狀
留下顏色
是種種只有你才能調配出來的

心情,一年一年地描寫了上去
。顏色有磁,深邃而均勻──
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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 17:18:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

留下顏色
是種種只有你才能調配出來的

心情,一年一年地描寫了上去
。顏色有磁,深邃而均勻──

很有特色
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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 17:23:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

这自画像是诗性的,有很多的负载。
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PostPosted: 2011-05-31 19:46:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝!

可以參考看看Mark Rothko的畫.


在此, 空屋也是個隱喻, 不定侷限於畫.
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