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弄巧成拙(小小说)
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PostPosted: 2006-06-17 16:04:02    Post subject: 弄巧成拙(小小说) Reply with quote


[size=18] 弄巧成拙(小小说)

文/董贤举(湖北.武汉)

那天,阿心在马路边闲逛,突然想一个人出去度假。
冒出这个想法并非是头脑发热。前些日子剧团的团长约见阿心,说这次出去培训本来只有一个名额,是团长在文化馆软磨硬缠又加上阿心的,阿心心里苦笑着,出去培训这事,团长哪一点也沾不上边。在三年前从文化馆分流到了阿心所在的剧团后,靠背景关系当上了团长,虽然对剧团的事情是一窍不通,却会变着法儿沾上阿心名正言顺的出去培训。其实阿心心里比谁都透亮,培什么训,还不是老一套——度假,玩一玩。
想来想去,阿心一肚子的窝火不快活。可又有什么法子让团长羞于与自己出去呢?其实,剧团的这次起死回生团长是毫无半点功劳的,阿心是剧团的顶梁柱,通过调查走访阿心发现,在市场经济高速发展的今天,人们开始从高现代的电器化中回归“自然”,在舞台戏剧里寻找感觉的人是越来越多。阿心是有心人,这一发现知道剧团的“春天”已经来临,于是适时连续创作了多部舞台剧,并一二再再而三的说服团长后,剧团试着演了一出,哪料现场火爆,剧团名声一时大震,半年的效益竟是前三年的总和,特别是最近一部戏,连续月余久演不衰,就连腔不圆腿罗圈的团长也得意忘形的不时上台客串一下角色,享受享受观众送钞票又送掌声的感觉。用团长的话说:“简直——就是妙极了!”可团长生来记性差,过目就忘,为此,阿心只好在最后一幕将一段要背台词的戏改成写在纸上由团长读台词,而台词一读完戏就终了,因此团长每次总借此机会致谢幕词,团长的名声竟也蒸蒸日上。阿心有种被人挖心的感觉。
帷幕在等待中拉开,戏剧在巧妙的编排中轻车熟路的将剧情演绎得脉络清晰,环环相连又扣人心弦,掌声如浪,一阵高过一阵。最后一幕的帷布徐启,早已着妆好的团长饰着地主太爷有模有样的摇晃着走上舞台,故事的情节应该马上有个管家过来送一张收租清单,团长只要照着读一遍戏就完了。可这时阿心突然心机一动,团长已客串这个角色十余场次,台词应该早就记熟了,于是迅速换装替代管家,从后台走上前,将清单递了上去,正待团长鼓腮运气开念,一看却傻了眼,阿心递来的是白纸一张,上面连个黑点都没有!一时豆大的汗扑面而下,团长眼望着阿心,心里已明白八九,只气得双手发抖,脸色忽青忽紫,嘴欲张而无言,戏眼看就要眼砸了,阿心见状也慌张起来,赶快跟上前去救戏:“老爷,今年佃户收成不好,是以没有收到一石租,你就别气坏身子啦”。话未落音,剧场掌声雷动,观众喝彩声震耳发馈。
第二天,让阿心哭笑不得的是,团长因昨天的经典演技倾倒全场观众而一人“培训”去了,阿心则在文化馆特地为他一人开办的政治学习班里“度假”。
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PostPosted: 2006-06-17 19:00:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

 弄巧成拙,却把一个不学无术的家伙捧了上去......故事本身很有趣,是写小小说的好材料。在故事的结构、人物的描写等方面,还大有修改的空间。谢谢来稿,请以后多来!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-20 23:03:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

请多指点,谢谢.
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