影沉寒水
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 Posted: 2011-05-09 03:41:03 Post subject: 五古•读书杂记 |
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五古•读书杂记
抱朴卧寒斋，炼心晓命乖。
兰开风雅颂，蝶动庄周谐。
当梦怀千载，素月下石阶。
能为春江水，遗韵飨同侪。
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胡恢宗
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| Posted: 2011-05-09 05:32:48 Post subject: |
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诗意很美，惜“素月”出律，尚宜斟酌。个见。仅供参考。向您问好。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2011-05-09 15:25:27 Post subject: |
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“能为春江水，遺韵飨同侪”，同好同飨。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2011-05-10 02:34:00 Post subject: |
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| 胡恢宗 wrote: |
| 诗意很美，惜“素月”出律，尚宜斟酌。个见。仅供参考。向您问好。 |
是首古风
问好
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2011-05-14 01:31:25 Post subject: |
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| 很喜欢首联，内涵深意。 |
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