黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-09 07:38:04 Post subject: 七绝呈听云馆主 |
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七绝 呈听云馆主
仰馆主才高德劭,敬呈小诗一首,敬请指教.
听遍词林万类声,
云开睿眼辨芜菁,
馆中走笔诚褒贬,
主客同欣益友情. |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-09 16:46:49 Post subject: |
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意蕴幽雅,构思新颖。 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-09 17:20:07 Post subject: |
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不错,还带个藏头,鼓掌!一天天在进步。 |
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聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-09 20:29:09 Post subject: |
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拜望黃洋界詞長,忱謝詞長賜詩,收藏了! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-10 04:53:41 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪晓松听云馆主三位词长的鼓励 |
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