聽雲館主
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七律 春情
春情如水復如煙，花事匆匆到柳綿。
化外遺民歸禹域，劫餘野老話堯年。
悲歡境界無多夢，山海行程又幾千。
記否西窗風雨夕，挑燈琢句對床聯。
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-03-17 11:28:50 Post subject: |
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请教老师, 夕在平水韵是仄声吗? 我不"涁港"广东话, 所以只用新韵  |
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| Posted: 2007-03-17 11:49:19 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 请教老师, 夕在平水韵是仄声吗? 我不"涁港"广东话, 所以只用新韵 |
白水兄，我不敢为师，“夕”入声也， 旧声韵“上，去，入”为仄声。 |
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-03-17 12:27:42 Post subject: |
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| 秋叶 wrote: |
| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 请教老师, 夕在平水韵是仄声吗? 我不"涁港"广东话, 所以只用新韵 |
白水兄，我不敢为师，“夕”入声也， 旧声韵“上，去，入”为仄声。 |
谢过秋叶JJ, 秋香MM可好  |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-03-17 12:30:00 Post subject: |
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挑燈琢句對床聯
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-03-17 17:04:37 Post subject: |
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我来学习学习 |
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李盈枝
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| 人世多风雨，老来亦深言。学习了！ |
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記否西窗風雨夕，挑燈琢句對床聯。
韵味无穷。学习。问好。
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