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七律•晚春行（新韵）

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2011-04-30 05:22:30 Post subject: 七律•晚春行（新韵）

七律•晚春行（新韵）栖霞渡暖早烟炊，柳外轻扬白鹭飞。水上晴红朝日走，山间叠翠引云归。驻足运笔描图乐，入眼清尘吐气微。此道寻竹谁最远？三春怠后百折回。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-04-30 15:25:46 Post subject:

描绘晚春美景，如在目前。欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-05-01 02:27:17 Post subject: 回复影沉寒水

“晴红”对“叠翠”；“远笔”对“清尘”，当可斟酌。个见，仅供参考。问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-05-01 04:09:16 Post subject:

谢谢师长指导 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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