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行香子—晨书

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-04-17 18:44:40 Post subject: 行香子—晨书

一夜风狂，微雨淋窗。杏浓妆、蝶舞蜂忙。闲池弄碧，水泛鳞光。荡舟歌雅，倾歌意，新歌扬。声声婉转，字字苍茫。叹华年、曾诉兰章。春秋一梦，几阅斜阳。且留诗心，抒诗笔，醉诗行。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-04-18 04:37:15 Post subject:

清词丽句，雅意歌扬。欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-18 07:08:05 Post subject:

春秋一梦，几阅斜阳。且留诗心，抒诗笔，醉诗行。一片诗心醉斜阳。学习问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-04-18 08:07:28 Post subject:

荡舟歌雅，倾歌意，新歌扬。且留诗心，抒诗笔，醉诗行。叠字出新意。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-04-18 19:06:40 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

清词丽句，雅意歌扬。欣赏！

谢谢您的点评！
问候春安！

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-04-18 19:07:58 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

春秋一梦，几阅斜阳。且留诗心，抒诗笔，醉诗行。
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谢谢关注！问好。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-04-18 19:10:30 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

荡舟歌雅，倾歌意，新歌扬。
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谢谢qinghongGG点评！
问候qinghong兄 Razz

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Posted: 2011-04-19 18:21:34 Post subject:

mm的诗歌写的更好了

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-04-19 19:13:52 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

mm的诗歌写的更好了 Very Happy

谢谢JJ鼓励！问春安 Razz

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