晴天雨天 秀才

Joined: 20 Jan 2010 Posts: 213 Location: 杭州 晴天雨天Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-15 19:54:48 Post subject: 青岛 |
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青岛
海水一退再退
栈桥无限期的延伸
一块孤独的石头裸露在空气的尽头
时日漫长
谁的声音能找对方向
搁浅的渔船
那张风干的老网
抱成一团
青岛写在诗歌里
我用什么交换
情人、食盐还有粮食 _________________ 得到并不一定好,失去并不一定差! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-17 02:46:26 Post subject: |
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| 简约,精辟 |
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晴天雨天 秀才

Joined: 20 Jan 2010 Posts: 213 Location: 杭州 晴天雨天Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-17 04:27:57 Post subject: |
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谢谢老师来读! _________________ 得到并不一定好,失去并不一定差! |
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令通 童生
Joined: 19 Apr 2011 Posts: 12
令通Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-19 22:35:49 Post subject: |
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| 内在的东西过少 |
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