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卜算子· 冰箱
冰清
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 12:23:06    Post subject: 卜算子· 冰箱 Reply with quote

卜算子· 冰箱
—依韵奉和恢宗兄《卜算子·买冰箱》


最喜是冰箱,你歇它勤悫。

夏日儿孙汗腺忙,只把亲亲谒。


可贵是襟情,朋伴欢声切。

内里空明总海涵,俯仰随心悦。


胡恢宗《卜算子·买冰箱》原玉
读叶英儿诗友“买冰箱”临屏戏作卜算子一首以赠。

可恶是冰箱,无故将工歇。

欲去维修觉太难,窘困曾经月。


手足见真情,陪去商场择。

挑中深红一款新,惬意难言说。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 14:28:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

诙谐,幽默,写实 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 14:43:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

有心人生活处处皆有诗。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-04-15 16:26:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

“内里空明总海涵,俯仰由宫阙”。
寄趣言理,尽得咏物之神。问好!
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胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2011-04-16 04:57:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢冰清老师奉和。
游戏之作,未加推敲,故不成体统,特向诗友致歉。
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