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《用亲情的眼睛看天空》

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-03-31 21:43:32 Post subject: 《用亲情的眼睛看天空》

《用亲情的眼睛看天空》一声鸟鸣给清晨的划痕像婉转的身影刚刚经过一阵馨香给黎明的问候像甜蜜的人昨晚来过壁灯上挂个小蜘蛛儿小小的蜘蛛你太小了小也是她传来的喜讯打开窗子用亲情的眼睛看天空天空什么也没有甜蜜的人根本没来过《不留下任何来过的痕迹》选择一个风雨交加的夜晚把伞插在你的坟头，母亲，让这一夜彻底把我淋湿母亲，如果我死在你前面你将如果哭晴这夜夜风雨选择一个风和日丽的天气不烧纸不摆贡品我只想在你坟旁幸福地酣睡一会母亲，我的手脚会小心翼翼不在你的坟头留下任何来过的痕迹 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

唐慧
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Posted: 2011-04-01 02:36:10 Post subject:

“打开窗子用亲情的眼睛看天空天空什么也没有甜蜜的人根本没来过 ” 写出了诗人那种淡淡的失望 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

低处的迷雾
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Posted: 2011-04-04 15:30:22 Post subject:

质朴平实感人 _________________ 写诗就是灵魂在私奔。那些风中的道路，我一一痛过的伤口，已被跋涉的脚步止住了腥酸。博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236291191

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2011-04-04 17:04:00 Post subject:

打开窗子用亲情的眼睛看天空天空什么也没有甜蜜的人根本没来过 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

白水
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Posted: 2011-04-04 18:09:12 Post subject:

我只想在你坟旁幸福地酣睡一会母亲，我的手脚会小心翼翼不在你的坟头留下任何来过的痕迹难得能想到

唐慧
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Posted: 2011-04-05 02:31:38 Post subject:

母亲，我的手脚会小心翼翼不在你的坟头留下任何来过的痕迹 _________________ 诗人是生命的歌手，灵魂的祭祀！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1827748983

杨海军
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Posted: 2011-04-06 02:36:00 Post subject:

真实的感觉，质朴感人，问候少君诗人！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

东北诗弦
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Posted: 2011-04-06 04:51:59 Post subject:

一声鸟鸣给清晨的划痕像婉转的身影刚刚经过 _________________ 但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？

王时光
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Posted: 2011-04-10 14:35:16 Post subject:

天空一定是温情、温暖的。

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-04-13 02:58:17 Post subject:

谢楼上各位。最近太忙，迟复为歉！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

涅阳三水
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Posted: 2011-04-13 06:20:53 Post subject:

一阵馨香给黎明的问候像甜蜜的人昨晚来过心怀美好！幸福就不远哈！ _________________ 教师。亲情。文字。旅游。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/ahwo818 QQ:179337917

韩少君
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Posted: 2011-04-16 23:31:29 Post subject:

谢谢涅阳三水赏读-----问好 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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