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《用亲情的眼睛看天空》
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2011-03-31 21:43:32    Post subject: 《用亲情的眼睛看天空》 Reply with quote

《用亲情的眼睛看天空》

一声鸟鸣给清晨的划痕
像婉转的身影刚刚经过
一阵馨香给黎明的问候
像甜蜜的人昨晚来过

壁灯上挂个小蜘蛛儿
小小的蜘蛛你太小了
小也是她传来的喜讯

打开窗子
用亲情的眼睛看天空
天空什么也没有
甜蜜的人根本没来过

《不留下任何来过的痕迹》


选择一个风雨交加的夜晚
把伞插在你的坟头,母亲,
让这一夜彻底把我淋湿
母亲,如果我死在你前面
你将如果哭晴这夜夜风雨

选择一个风和日丽的天气
不烧纸不摆贡品
我只想在你坟旁幸福地酣睡一会
母亲,我的手脚会小心翼翼
不在你的坟头
留下任何来过的痕迹

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唐慧
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PostPosted: 2011-04-01 02:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

“打开窗子
用亲情的眼睛看天空
天空什么也没有
甜蜜的人根本没来过 ”

写出了诗人那种淡淡的失望
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诗人是生命的歌手,灵魂的祭祀!
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低处的迷雾
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 15:30:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

质朴平实感人
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子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 17:04:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

打开窗子
用亲情的眼睛看天空
天空什么也没有
甜蜜的人根本没来过
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我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼,现在正在大海的深处。
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PostPosted: 2011-04-04 18:09:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

我只想在你坟旁幸福地酣睡一会
母亲,我的手脚会小心翼翼
不在你的坟头
留下任何来过的痕迹

难得能想到
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唐慧
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PostPosted: 2011-04-05 02:31:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

母亲,我的手脚会小心翼翼
不在你的坟头
留下任何来过的痕迹
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诗人是生命的歌手,灵魂的祭祀!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-06 02:36:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

真实的感觉 ,质朴感人,问候少君诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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东北诗弦
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PostPosted: 2011-04-06 04:51:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

一声鸟鸣给清晨的划痕
像婉转的身影刚刚经过
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但觉高歌有鬼神,焉知饿死填沟壑?
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王时光
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PostPosted: 2011-04-10 14:35:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

天空一定是温情、温暖的。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2011-04-13 02:58:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢楼上各位。最近太忙,迟复为歉!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-13 06:20:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

一阵馨香给黎明的问候
像甜蜜的人昨晚来过

心怀美好!幸福就不远哈!
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PostPosted: 2011-04-16 23:31:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢涅阳三水赏读-----问好
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