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冬天,一朵月季的开绽
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PostPosted: 2009-02-27 01:46:19    Post subject: 冬天,一朵月季的开绽 Reply with quote

光秃秃的空枝,孤零零的她,所有的花瓣都紧紧地拢向花心,带着微微泛黑的红。

在那个花坛里,在那些齐腰的四季青间,她兀立在一人高的空枝上——撑着她的那带刺绿枝上的叶子早就掉光了,毕竟冬天已经来很久了。

可怜的花苞,还没来得及开放,就错过了花季!冬天这么漫长,更大的寒冷还在后面,她肯定永远也迎不来枝头的艳丽了。对一朵没能在冬天来临前绽放的月季花苞来说,等待她的,除了夭折,还会有什么呢?连偶尔出来觅食的麻雀也不禁为她惋惜了。

时间就这么一天天地过去。起雾了,打霜了,结冰了,气温越来越低了。错过季节的月季花苞在寒风里颤抖着,但没有凋零,它依旧孤零零地杵在枝头——紧闭着闺房,带着那越来越黑的红。

终于有一天,下雪了。好大的一场雪啊,雪花纷纷扬扬,漫天飞舞。地上,花坛里,四季青上,都披上了白袍。那样地白,愈发映衬出花坛里独树花枝的纤弱黑瘦。遭受严冬的月季花苞,更憔悴了,她几乎全黑了。而且,尽管她的闺门闭得那么紧,依旧避不开雪花的侵袭,那些占领了她头顶的白,让她的身子益发干枯地黑着。

也许,这是一场注定都无法逃脱的劫难。所有的关注都为这朵冬天里的月季叹息:开绽的红艳,或许只是寄存于来世的梦。

雪终于化了,人们惊奇地发现,依然墨绿的四季青中,那朵遭遇了冰雪的月季花苞并没有耷拉着脑袋零落成泥。她还在那纤细的花枝上,还带着那泛着红的黑——谁也不清楚她是怎么熬过来的。

雪后的天,终于晴了,一晴就是很长时间。送走寒潮的严冬有着很大的温差,早晚还打霜结冰的,中午的阳光却光亮亮的,暖和得很。暖和得让沐浴冬阳的人们脱下了棉衣,暖和得让走过霜雪的月季花解开了裹身的黑红色外衣——的确是等待得太久了,她再也不愿娇羞地捂着自己,她要开放了!是的,她已经开放了,她迫不及待地解开了层层叠叠的大红稠裙,一件,又一件,裙袂错落有致地交叠着。那样地红,那样地美,像天上的云霞,像地上的火焰……毫无疑问,在这单调的寒冬里,她的妩媚与艳丽无可匹比。也许,更因为如此,她微微弯下腰枝,显得那么谦逊。

“好奇怪啊,这时候还有月季花开?”过往的大人小孩们都不约而同地行着注目礼——这腊月里难得一见的娇艳!

一阵微风捎来了送给她的所有惊诧与赞叹。颤颤地,她笑了,为自己历尽严寒的坚持,在暖和的冬阳下尽情地欢笑着。

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PostPosted: 2009-02-27 03:33:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

我似曾看见过类似的情景,但没有你文学地注意和深情。

观察久,描摹细,寄寓深,文语美,好文美文!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-28 13:31:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

寓情于景, 以文言志.欣赏
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PostPosted: 2009-07-05 22:16:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
我似曾看见过类似的情景,但没有你文学地注意和深情。
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才看到回帖,谢谢鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-05 22:20:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
寓情于景, 以文言志.欣赏


留神于自然,永远会有启迪。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 14:57:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

花朵在生命的持守中绽放,因而更蓍风流,更具内涵。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-08 02:41:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

茹石 wrote:
花朵在生命的持守中绽放,因而更蓍风流,更具内涵。

是啊,生命的内涵在坚持。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-08 13:32:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
光秃秃的空枝,孤零零的她,所有的花瓣都紧紧地拢向花心,带着微微泛黑的红。
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好文才,要學習,增進詩路..
一枝花真可愛,荷夢真了得!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-09 16:38:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

sfiawong wrote:
荷梦 wrote:
光秃秃的空枝,孤零零的她,所有的花瓣都紧紧地拢向花心,带着微微泛黑的红。
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好文才,要學習,增進詩路..
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谢谢指点!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-11 13:51:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

历尽磨难的艳丽
是人们对生活的赞美和期盼
以物托志 以寄生命之奇迹
赞 学习荷梦君如此有心
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PostPosted: 2009-07-13 22:00:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

一朵月季的开放,给了我深刻的人生启迪!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 17:41:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

被我们倍加关注的原因就是:在不允许开放的季节里绽放了的月季。这也是解释某种生命现象的哲学钥匙。欣赏您的别样的文思。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 18:38:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

为别样的开放敬礼,为美丽的生命赞叹。
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  某人学习了。
  
 
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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 20:36:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友的评读!问好!
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PostPosted: 2011-02-11 22:27:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

不只腊梅独对寒,月季也能傲霜雪。

文章是对一个自然现象咏叹,也是对一种精神的歌扬!
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PostPosted: 2011-02-13 19:11:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

再次欣赏精华之作!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-19 04:28:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

再读荷梦
更是多了春天的气息
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冬天,一朵月季的开绽 为自己历尽严寒的坚持,在暖和的冬阳下尽情地欢笑着。

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PostPosted: 2011-04-13 01:51:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

美丽的花,美丽的文章,美丽而可敬的人!问好,荷梦君!
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