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七律 · 八十初度

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-01 18:22:10 Post subject: 七律 · 八十初度

七律 · 八十初度峥嵘岁月平凡过，池水浮萍八十秋。曾入枪林空弹雨，每逢恶浪有方舟。休闲未省冯唐恨，读史何怜李广愁。只觉夕阳无限好，诗魂韵魄戏风流。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-04-01 18:53:18 Post subject:

祝恢宗诗友长寿安康！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-04-02 07:48:02 Post subject:

祝贺胡兄大寿康宁！最后一句不叶韵，建议改作“詩魂韵魄一闲鸥” _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-04-02 12:01:50 Post subject:

谢庆宏师祝福。谢黄洋界老师指点，已作修改。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-04-02 13:43:39 Post subject:

好律。尤喜“休闲未省冯唐恨，读史无怜李广愁”胸襟豁达之佳句。恭祝恢宗兄健康长寿!

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-04-02 16:21:21 Post subject:

谢冰清兄谬夸。感谢您的祝福；也祝您健康长寿。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

宁家珍
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Posted: 2011-04-08 23:36:21 Post subject:

只觉夕阳无限好，诗魂韵魄戏风流。欣赏佳作，祝恢宗诗友生日快乐！身体健康！

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Posted: 2011-04-12 17:30:09 Post subject:

谢家珍诗友的阅评和祝福，并祝您健康幸福。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-04-13 01:22:24 Post subject:

前三联本就不错，加上“只觉夕阳无限好，诗魂韵魄一闲鸥”更是好句连连。祝胡兄健康长寿，百年共携。

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Posted: 2011-04-14 03:35:04 Post subject:

谢老山兄的祝福和鼓励。也祝您健康长寿。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

他乡客
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Posted: 2011-04-25 16:44:36 Post subject:

好诗。胡兄真是老英雄。祝您长寿安康。

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Posted: 2011-04-26 05:15:41 Post subject:

谢他乡客先生的福。也祝您全家幸福。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-05-01 11:25:18 Post subject:

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Posted: 2011-05-03 02:42:27 Post subject:

谢李盈枝老师的关照。向您问好。（对英语我是文盲，故所问非所答。特致歉。） _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-05-03 18:27:23 Post subject:

改得不错。如果按原句活法，似乎将人弄得太累了。闲鸥好啊，可以快乐无为的生活，似乎进入了另一种境界。 _________________ 但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？

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Posted: 2011-05-06 19:13:24 Post subject:

谢东北诗弦的评议，问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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