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小重山裘破衣薄不胜风

墨望山
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墨望山Collection

Posted: 2011-01-08 23:41:18 Post subject: 小重山裘破衣薄不胜风

小重山文-胡默裘破衣薄不胜风。不觉天已暮，夜露浓。相思不过一时情，白头了，许记少年行。春过草又青。三月花似锦，入深庭。倚门惆怅渐黄昏，茕茕立，只恨负今生。

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2011-01-09 09:24:37 Post subject:

白头了，许记少年行 - 景致情生！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2011-01-09 15:58:49 Post subject:

诗情画意

胡恢宗
秀才

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胡恢宗Collection

Posted: 2011-01-09 17:56:02 Post subject:

词画和谐，引人入胜。“浓”“昏”二字似乎出韵，尚可斟酌。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

墨望山
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Posted: 2011-04-11 16:51:36 Post subject:

受教了~！

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