黄吉元 童生
Joined: 04 Apr 2007 Posts: 27
黄吉元Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-04 08:25:03 Post subject: 堂 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-04-04 08:30:32 Post subject: |
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感谢黄吉元带来几个厚实亮丽的
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黄吉元 童生
Joined: 04 Apr 2007 Posts: 27
黄吉元Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-04 19:29:44 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
感谢黄吉元带来几个厚实亮丽的
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谢谢朋友的厚爱,第一次来,希望多指点。握手!!! |
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三色堇 秀才
Joined: 25 Nov 2006 Posts: 148 Location: 西安 三色堇Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-04 22:35:03 Post subject: |
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诗与评都非常棒,我来操。 |
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司马策风 举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006 Posts: 1211 Location: 温哥华 司马策风Collection |
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俞伟远 秀才
Joined: 02 Feb 2007 Posts: 282
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Posted: 2007-04-05 03:30:20 Post subject: |
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学习朋友的精到的语言处理和结构,诗意的独到把握. _________________ 俞伟远:1967生,1987大学毕业、工作。1990年后几乎与诗绝缘,2006年春重拾笔,感悟生活,凝望心灵,自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-05 04:40:29 Post subject: |
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看了,感觉诗人是很成熟的一位,有思想有技巧。有些诗评很到位。我很欣赏。
但我还要说一句,诗人还有很大的发展空间。因为无技巧才是大技巧,俗而不俗才是高境界;而作者还在用技巧和语言隐晦的层面上。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行
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黄吉元 童生
Joined: 04 Apr 2007 Posts: 27
黄吉元Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-06 23:16:31 Post subject: |
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谢谢大家的评点,我很感动的,希望继续指正。 |
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冷水 童生

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 53
冷水Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-09 04:39:01 Post subject: |
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学习 _________________ 越来越蠢 |
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