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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 08:25:03    Post subject: 堂 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 08:30:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢黄吉元带来几个厚实亮丽的

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黄吉元
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 19:29:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
感谢黄吉元带来几个厚实亮丽的

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谢谢朋友的厚爱，第一次来，希望多指点。握手！！！
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 22:35:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗与评都非常棒，我来操。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 23:48:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有生活功力。语言简练，令人回味。

尤其在结尾处理得具有匠心。值得借鉴学习。

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PostPosted: 2007-04-05 03:30:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
学习朋友的精到的语言处理和结构,诗意的独到把握.
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PostPosted: 2007-04-05 04:40:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
看了，感觉诗人是很成熟的一位，有思想有技巧。有些诗评很到位。我很欣赏。
但我还要说一句，诗人还有很大的发展空间。因为无技巧才是大技巧，俗而不俗才是高境界；而作者还在用技巧和语言隐晦的层面上。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-06 23:16:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢大家的评点，我很感动的，希望继续指正。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 04:39:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
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