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买冰箱
叶英儿
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Joined: 03 Jun 2006
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2011-04-06 04:06:27    Post subject: 买冰箱 Reply with quote

作者:叶英儿


我们家的冰箱坏了
叫修电冰箱的师傅维修
可就是不好修理
要不就送到维修店里维修
大哥说
不如买一个合算
冰箱坏了有几个月的时间了
没冰箱的日子真觉得缺了点什么
今天和三哥一起去北岙商场买冰箱
挑选了一会儿
最后选中了一款深红色面的漂亮冰箱
很快就将冰箱运回家了
三哥帮忙
将冰箱安装布置的漂漂亮亮
真高兴
又有冰箱可用了
(浙江、叶英儿)
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William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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PostPosted: 2011-04-06 17:13:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

我觉得要注入一些“诗意”才不致散文化。
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子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2011-04-07 01:46:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,问好小妹,品读问好。
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