非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
Posted: 2011-03-29 01:58:44 Post subject: 配角 SUPPORTING CASTS |
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配角
楼梯把自己蹬得
空咚空咚响
同电梯赛跑
就像上次他们拍警匪
追逐战那样
紧张逼真
SUPPORTING CASTS
Almost as real and exciting
as the hot-pursuit scenes
from a police story
the stairs
racing the elevators
wind themselves
down with all sorts of commotion and empty
echoes _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-01 00:12:56 Post subject: |
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这一赛跑,语序都颠倒。  _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2011-04-02 18:22:20 Post subject: |
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还要再读几遍。配角是谁还没搞清楚。
楼梯吗?现在走楼梯都当成锻炼身体的方法了。
问好非马先生。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-04-02 18:50:40 Post subject: |
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老师的诗歌够幽默,当今社会主角太多,配角变分子了  |
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
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