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雪夜渔舟—赋雪

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-25 18:27:20 Post subject: 雪夜渔舟—赋雪

絮迟别，漫自棹孤舟，顺流观雪。山缀寒瑶，林披冷素，楼宇玉装重叠。胸怀莹洁，入雅乐、韵浓情切。远辞峰谷，轻盈飞舞，未知停歇。千峰声迹灭，惟留悠然趣，雾云连接。一叶逍遥，身闲自在，不顾万籁人绝。冷香暗裂，遣笑靥、报春欣悦。江湖久钓，新歌轻赋，水中明月。《雪夜渔舟》格式；双调一百字，前后段各十一句，六仄韵调见虚靖真人词，因词中有〔自棹孤舟，顺流观雪〕句，取以为名。此调只有虚靖真人一首词，无别首可校。《钦定词谱》又名《康熙词谱》收录。

白水
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Posted: 2011-03-25 18:45:30 Post subject:

MM好词，是配画词吗？我这儿只能看见一个小红X。

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-03-26 04:03:06 Post subject:

欣赏好词并问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-26 21:42:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM好词，是配画词吗？我这儿只能看见一个小红X。

谢谢JJ点评！是配了小画。
（555，555、555、555图图偶也看不见啦！ Surprised

555，偶这一样也是个小红X Rolling Eyes

555，岛兄救偶呀！）

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-26 21:48:01 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

欣赏好词并问好。

谢谢关注并问好。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-03-27 03:49:39 Post subject:

词配画，也有柳宗元的“寒江雪”意蕴。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:55:43 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

词配画，也有柳宗元的“寒江雪”意蕴。

谢谢qinghongGG点评！问好。

君山楚女
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Posted: 2011-03-27 22:54:01 Post subject:

有几分古香古色，让人心醉。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-27 22:57:46 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

有几分古香古色，让人心醉。

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2011-03-28 00:57:02 Post subject:

问好莹雪！好久没上网了，原因有；一，身体保养；二，最近写不出东东。读莹雪MM大作，挥挥洒洒，尽得词家精髓。学习了。

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-28 18:00:46 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好莹雪！好久没上网了，原因有；一，身体保养；二，最近写不出东东。
...

问好笑卿兄！身体要紧，好好修养调理。待身体康复后诗意雅兴自然就会喷薄而出了！
谢谢兄台点评，兄台过誉啦！

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