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北京适合灯光(组诗)
赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 21:35:36    Post subject: 北京适合灯光(组诗) Reply with quote

北京适合灯光(组诗)

赵福治(中国·北京)

《掩饰》

我一再掩饰夜色,掩饰
北京两位女士的迎迓,使我
忘记身后的电梯。忘记
握手也是一种礼仪

端起啤酒,鹅舌接近
话语。薄饼
包裹烤鸭,葱段。今夜
酸菜的味道格外诱人,眼神一飘
就使我记住,紫玉是饭店的名字
而诗人,不是我的名字。摘不下
楼外的星星

《姿势》

把风交给窗外。酒水
适宜心态,表达
我就坐在窗前。月亮的距离
是从手到窗帘的距离。镜头
拉近椅子。男女的面孔
都一个摸样,不一样的是头发
和吸烟的姿势

可是,今夜分明与我无关
我是那窗外的风,吹燃
丢弃的烟头。忽略
眼神


《接触》

水果是拼盘的造型
他们唱《梁祝》,没有蝴蝶
她们唱《牧羊曲》
没有羊,也没有草
胡须光滑。鞭挂在鼻梁
我唱《跟往事干杯》
却放不下杯子


骨头怎样燃烧
我不知道。手扶沙发
屏幕高于头顶。屁股下面的楼层中
有没有一人像我。这样
接触酒绿灯红
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三色堇
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PostPosted: 2007-04-04 22:27:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

节制,内敛的诗歌,问好老朋友。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-08 07:06:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活的, 思索的. 喜欢
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PostPosted: 2007-04-08 15:00:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

以日常景致入诗,显示了功力。
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王浥
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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Location: 中国广东肇庆
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PostPosted: 2007-04-08 16:38:31    Post subject: 问好北京! Reply with quote

窗外的风,吹燃
丢弃的烟头
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PostPosted: 2007-04-08 16:59:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

一种生活的思索,一种生活的陶醉,现实美,问好.
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 21:17:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

三色堇 wrote:
节制,内敛的诗歌,问好老朋友。



三色堇兄弟多交流.
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 21:17:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
生活的, 思索的. 喜欢

兄好,握手.
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 21:18:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
以日常景致入诗,显示了功力。


多指正.
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 21:19:30    Post subject: Re: 问好北京! Reply with quote

王浥 wrote:
窗外的风,吹燃
丢弃的烟头

问好。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 21:20:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

zhangmin wrote:
一种生活的思索,一种生活的陶醉,现实美,问好.

问好姐姐。远握。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 22:13:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这几首,学习了!!!祝好!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 22:38:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
喜欢这几首,学习了!!!祝好!!


握手兄,多批评。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 22:48:57    Post subject: Re: 北京适合灯光(组诗) Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
北京适合灯光(组诗)

赵福治(中国·北京)

《掩饰》

我一再掩饰夜色,掩饰
北京两位女士的迎迓,使我
忘记身后的电梯。忘记
握手也是一种礼仪

端起啤酒,鹅舌接近
话语。薄饼
包裹烤鸭,葱段。今夜
酸菜的味道格外诱人,眼神一飘
就使我记住,紫玉是饭店的名字

而诗人,不是我的名字。摘不下
楼外的星星


《姿势》

把风交给窗外。酒水
适宜心态,表达
我就坐在窗前。月亮的距离
是从手到窗帘的距离。镜头
拉近椅子。男女的面孔
都一个摸样,不一样的是头发
和吸烟的姿势

可是,今夜分明与我无关
我是那窗外的风,吹燃
丢弃的烟头。忽略
眼神



《接触》

水果是拼盘的造型
他们唱《梁祝》,没有蝴蝶
她们唱《牧羊曲》
没有羊,也没有草
胡须光滑。鞭挂在鼻梁
我唱《跟往事干杯》
却放不下杯子



骨头怎样燃烧
我不知道
。手扶沙发
屏幕高于头顶。屁股下面的楼层中
有没有一人像我。这样
接触酒绿灯红


《》摆渡,问好 ;))
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-04-18 14:19:13    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

好诗,值得学习
这提醒了我,最细小的情节也会无限丰富.
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