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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 06:51:26    Post subject: 五律 望月 Reply with quote

三月十九日,凭窗观月,青宇中一轮明月当空,据说是日之月
离地球最近,故比平常更为皎洁。人间有难,月照无私,望月
兴叹,为受自然灾害和战乱的人们祈福。

玉魄银辉满 乾坤分外明
蟾华留倩照 桂酒泄琼莹
惜影千秋意 怜光万里情
祈福殷祝愿 灾弭战云平
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 08:07:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

明月当空,黄老师仍牵挂灾弭战平,忧民之心明月可鉴。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 16:40:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝庆宏阅评。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:11:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

【001】十年风雨一壶油

无法揪来斗,孔丘收束脩。
红尘怀海瑞,白眼对高俅。
贤落三千丈,庸封万户侯。
忠言称黑话,娼妇变名优。
重色夸猫叫,轻民任鼠偷。
文攻文遭难,武斗武相侔。
骄横狐犬辈,贫寒鸾凤俦。
窦娥作冤鬼,庆父累深仇。
举世同歌德,特权呼反修。
才高安可忍,国破始甘休。
夹尾灾难躲,牛棚尽佝偻。

2011-3-22夜11:58
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:12:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

【002】卓文君

野花留宝靥,蔓草见罗裙。

——杜甫《琴台》

春梦萦孤枕,良宵月照孀。
闻琴慕才子,弃富作新娘。
朝暮甘销酒,风姿何逊嫱。
吟诗妾停纳,知错爱无妨。
今日当垆妇,嘲贫不笑娼。

2011-3-23凌晨1:36
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:13:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

【003】烟花三月

岁暮萧条甚,春来万木荣。
门前过红粉,枝上啭黄莺。
但喜千山翠,何须一世英。
小人常狗苟,君子笑蝇营。

韩愈《送穷文》:“蝇营狗苟,驱去复返。”

2011-3-23凌晨2:35
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:14:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

【004】读元曲

汉卿怀蕴玉,帘秀腹藏珠。
落魄惊天笔,销魂倾国姝。
江湖屈麟凤,云汉聚蛇蛛。
埋没才无数,不因时势殊。

——“汉”重,不改。

2011-3-23凌晨3:16
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:14:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

【005】发妻

究竟谁之罪?空怀赫尔岑。
荒淫迷凤阁,憔悴抚瑶琴。
盛世云遮月,中宵泪湿衾。
知今不如昨,枉自对天吟。

2011-3-23上午11:22
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:19:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
三月二十日,凭窗观月,青宇中一轮明月当空,据说是日之月
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近期未打电话询问《范义成盆景艺术》出版一事,届时奉告。多谢先生赐佳作锦上添花!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 19:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

【006】学诗

初晓平和仄,还迷对与粘。
穷通曾问卜,顺逆不须占。
月朗随心赋,花娇信手拈。
唯期得佳句,字字露珠沾。

2011-3-23中午12:10
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PostPosted: 2011-03-22 20:51:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

【007】空谷幽兰

月朗风清夜,如何忘旧疤?
冰心忆恩怨,玉指拨琵琶。
虽逊阳春韵,终非下里巴。
泥沙陷珠玉,迟早化奇葩。

下里巴人, 宋玉《对楚王问》:“客有歌于郢中者,其始曰:‘下里巴人’,国中属而和者数千人。”——此处以“下里巴”代之。(“玉”重,不改)

2011-3-23下午1:02
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PostPosted: 2011-03-23 05:59:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

【008】桃花源

重回生长地,游目忘伶仃。
日月明秋水,田园大客厅。
人喧尽忙碌,心静自安宁。
高雅遥难及,往来皆白丁。

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PostPosted: 2011-03-23 06:00:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

【009】蜗牛村男妇女主任

当年无富贵,落地也呱呱。
尚未拥豪宅,尤难抱美狐。
对人抛套话,从政画圆弧。
今有乌纱帽,位高权不孤。

2011-3-23下午3:15
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PostPosted: 2011-03-23 06:09:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

惜影千秋意 怜光万里情

好联,妙对。
问好黄兄!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-23 11:45:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

诚謝盈枝兄,冰清点评,问好二位!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-23 11:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

读盈枝兄连篇佳作,如沐春风,心清神爽。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-24 03:02:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

最近老是上不来

问好朋友们
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PostPosted: 2011-03-24 03:02:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

最近老是上不来

问好朋友们
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PostPosted: 2011-03-24 18:12:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

祈福殷祝愿 灾弭战云平
同祝
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PostPosted: 2011-03-25 04:40:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝白水应和。
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