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十六字令 · 咏梅

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-03-21 23:59:34 Post subject: 十六字令 · 咏梅

十六字令 · 咏梅梅，老干横斜入翠微。溶溶月，相约互依偎。梅，疏影虬枝映雪晖。清幽处，寂静喜相随。梅，闪闪红英点点瑰。花枝俏，无意与争魁。梅，冷艳人怜踏雪陪。清香吐，情韵沁心扉。梅，玉骨仙姿秀逸妃。玲珑透，梦里笑几回。梅，着意迎春送雪归。红英落，化作护花肥。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-03-22 06:04:48 Post subject:

多角度抒写梅情，欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-03-22 08:08:43 Post subject:

恢宗兄咏得好！

白水
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Posted: 2011-03-24 18:11:51 Post subject:

wow, 一树寒梅六枝花

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-03-25 06:02:54 Post subject:

谢黄洋界老师阅评。谢庆宏、白水二位老师阅读。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

莹雪
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Posted: 2011-03-26 21:51:37 Post subject:

多项吟咏，意蕴无穷。问好！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-03-27 04:30:33 Post subject:

谢莹雪兄点评。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

冰清
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:21:27 Post subject:

恢宗兄好词。梅情梅骨梅格都在！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:22:30 Post subject:

恢宗兄好词。梅情梅骨梅格都在！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:22:48 Post subject:

恢宗兄好词。梅情梅骨梅格都在！

冰清
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Posted: 2011-03-27 15:23:58 Post subject:

恢宗兄好词。梅情梅骨梅格都在！

君山楚女
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Posted: 2011-03-27 22:37:06 Post subject:

从不同侧面描写梅花，浅近、隽秀、新颖、精神！ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-03-28 00:37:29 Post subject:

学习恢宗兄咏梅词并问好！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-03-28 04:06:20 Post subject:

谢冰清、楚女、笑聊兄谬夸，向三位问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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