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七律新春寄语

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Posted: 2011-03-13 19:03:34 Post subject: 七律新春寄语

七律新春寄语冬去春来大地欢，铺开笔墨续新篇。寒冰离岸化溪水，雏雁乘风越远山。云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。家山隔海两相望，祈祷将来事事安。

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Posted: 2011-03-14 03:52:48 Post subject:

家山隔海两相望，祝愿未来事事安。赤子之心可鉴，向兄台问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-03-14 06:20:06 Post subject:

新春寄语，良好祝愿。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-03-14 08:10:53 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

家山隔海两相望，祝愿未来事事安。
赤子之心可鉴，向兄台问好。

谢谢恢宗兄雅赏。祝恢宗兄事事安好。

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Posted: 2011-03-14 08:15:33 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

新春寄语，良好祝愿。

谢谢黄老师雅赏。昨日与黄老师相聚，获益匪浅，谢谢黄老师。这首诗本来是2月前写来和秋叶兄的《回望》的，这次改了几字带来聚会应景。原来是：

七律新年寄语
---和秋叶《回望》

岁末谈诗话旧年，铺开笔墨续新篇。
寒冰离岸化春水，雏雁乘风上九天。
云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。
家山隔海两相望，祝愿未来事事安。

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Posted: 2011-03-14 15:58:35 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

新春寄语，良好祝愿。

谢谢黄老师雅赏。昨日与黄老师相聚，获益匪浅，谢谢黄老师。这首诗本来是2月前写来和秋叶兄的《回望》的，这次改了几字带来聚会应景。原来是：
...

谢庆宏兄和作,喜欢这联:

云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。

另: "流水"对"九天"是否可再推敲, 供参考.

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Posted: 2011-03-14 17:28:57 Post subject:

谢秋叶兄雅赏。“流水”---“九天”暂时宽对一下，容后再思。

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Posted: 2011-03-14 19:27:22 Post subject:

冬去春来，笔墨续新篇。。

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Posted: 2011-03-15 08:25:07 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

冬去春来，笔墨续新篇。。

谢谢诗妹雅赏。祝新春快乐！

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Posted: 2011-03-15 08:27:10 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

新春寄语，良好祝愿。

谢庆宏兄和作,喜欢这联:

...

谢谢秋叶兄！改为：溪水---远山，如何？

七律新春寄语

冬去春来大地欢，铺开笔墨续新篇。
寒冰离岸化溪水，雏燕乘风越远山。
云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。
家山隔海两相望，祝愿未来事事安。

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Posted: 2011-03-16 16:21:55 Post subject:

精益求精

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Posted: 2011-03-16 17:18:07 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

精益求精

谢谢白水兄鼓励！

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Posted: 2011-03-19 07:00:20 Post subject:

寒冰离岸冬去春来 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2011-03-19 08:20:00 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

寒冰离岸
冬去春来

谢谢连兄光临雅赏。枫叶国冬日长，冬去春来，春光尤其美好。

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Posted: 2011-03-21 10:23:11 Post subject:

云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。好联，春生潮涨！

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Posted: 2011-03-21 12:47:18 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

云动四方雷暴聚，潮生万里碧波翻。

好联，春生潮涨！

谢谢冰清老师雅赏。问好！

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