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忧郁的心
同志
童生


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PostPosted: 2011-03-15 20:11:08    Post subject: 忧郁的心 Reply with quote
忧郁的心
同志
心啊
你远走它乡
带走的是痴情
留下的是绝义

忧郁的心
总挂着惆怅
别离的失意
把痛苦的种子播撒在了心上
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山城子
榜眼


Joined: 23 May 2007
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Location: 中国贵州
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PostPosted: 2011-03-16 06:29:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
总挂着惆怅

——喜欢这样的句子！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。
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同志
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PostPosted: 2011-03-16 20:57:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
山城子 wrote:
总挂着惆怅

——喜欢这样的句子！

谢谢！祝好！
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2011-03-17 02:52:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
直抒胸臆。问好！
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2011-03-17 14:06:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
这首诗的节奏感好！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2011-03-17 21:45:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
直抒胸臆。问好！

谢谢你的评语，祝好！
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PostPosted: 2011-03-17 22:04:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
这首诗的节奏感好！！

欣赏了你的几首大作，棒极了！
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