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《古意》(2011年除夕,2、2)
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PostPosted: 2011-03-03 23:16:51    Post subject: 《古意》(2011年除夕,2、2) Reply with quote

古意(2011年除夕,2、2)
人生易衰老,岁月常蹉跎。
明年春更好,莫放佳日过。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-04 19:41:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生易老莫蹉跎,立意很好,且言简意赅。
古典诗词研究室,建议也研究一下诗词格律。偏面之言,仅供参考。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-06 02:25:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

------古典诗词研究室,建议也研究一下诗词格律。
谢谢二楼朋友的点评。这首诗是古绝,而非律绝。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-06 02:25:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

------古典诗词研究室,建议也研究一下诗词格律。
谢谢二楼朋友的点评。这首诗是古绝,而非律绝。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-06 05:00:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

恕我唐突,特致欠。
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