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沁园春为韩老七秩寿

王君明
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Posted: 2007-04-04 06:00:24 Post subject: 沁园春为韩老七秩寿

含笑春秋，妙笔如椽，点染绮霞。恰骚人欢聚，幽怀难释；诗坛放眼，感念交加。义胆无穷，文心未老，满苑繁英竞自华。为君寿，纵铜琶铁板，唱彻仙家。　　秾桃蹊径天涯，任曲水流觞泛远槎。倩陇头执教，新词激赏；中原咳唾，古韵犹嘉。淡定谈风，从容吐韵，五柳婆娑漫品茶。天行健，愿年年今日，细说桑麻。

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Posted: 2007-04-04 14:52:48 Post subject:

拜望君明先生！拜讀大作，欣賞！詞筆從容，深得慢詞三昧，學習了！ _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

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Posted: 2007-04-04 16:18:26 Post subject:

词美意浓。

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Posted: 2007-04-06 18:30:56 Post subject:

感谢聽雲館主、莹雪两位先生！还请不吝赐教！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2007-04-06 19:44:05 Post subject: Re: 沁园春为韩老七秩寿

王君明 wrote:

　　含笑春秋，妙笔如椽，点染绮霞。恰骚人欢聚，幽怀难禁；诗坛放眼，感念交加。义胆无穷，文心未老，满苑繁英竞自华。为君寿，纵铜琶铁板，唱彻仙家。　　秾桃蹊径天涯，任曲水流觞泛远槎。倩陇头执教，新词激赏；中原咳唾，古韵犹嘉。淡定谈风，从容吐韵，五柳婆娑漫品茶。天行健，愿年年今日，细说桑麻。

佳作也！淡定谈风，从容吐韵，五柳婆娑更是一语双关。真乃：妙笔如椽点绮霞，铜琶铁板唱仙家。学习了。

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Posted: 2007-04-06 20:31:09 Post subject:

用我刚做成的古诗词检验软件测试了一下 http://oson.ca/cpoetry/write_shi.php?cipai_id=74 平水韵，有一个问题： ⊙⊙●○○⊙●△ 任曲水流觞泛远槎〈—不合韵 ⊙⊙●○○●●○ 中华新韵：全部通过祝贺啦 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-04-06 20:36:41 Post subject:

槎这个字在平水韵里没有 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-04-07 03:30:42 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

槎
这个字
在平水韵里没有

這個字在平水韻裏屬下平六麻。
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Posted: 2007-04-10 07:09:17 Post subject:

问候晓松词长、和平岛词长和戴玨词长！感谢鼓励，向各位虚心学习。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2007-04-11 23:25:26 Post subject:

沁園春懷感，次韻王君明詞長道統神州，氣貫斗牛，光映碧霞。正窮江萬里，源流悠遠；為峰千仞，太上無加。大塊文章，凌雲詞筆，得意春風桃李華。山深處，認荊扉茅屋，三徑吾家。瀟疏琴劍生涯，任玉想瓊思銀漢槎。要評今論古，情懐激楚；尋幽訪勝，志趣清嘉。執麈談玄，擊壺聽曲，請飲香醇龍井茶。神遊去，見武陵溪畔，雞犬桑蔴。 _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

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Posted: 2007-04-13 06:16:00 Post subject:

十分感謝聽雲館主詞長賜大作，君明收藏學習！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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