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咏物二首

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-25 13:43:27 Post subject: 咏物二首

一咏蟹披坚执锐走江湖努目横行凛凛躯待到清霜偕酒日金膏玉质胜芳腴二咏虾善游好跃炫长须健足生钳物态殊身着水晶头戴戟芦花荡里畅欢愉 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2011-02-25 21:37:47 Post subject:

形象又有情趣。尤喜第一首。问好黄兄！

秋叶
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Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769

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Posted: 2011-02-25 21:50:50 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

一咏蟹
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大作象二幅素描，写出了它们的特点，但是这二种海物我是最爱吃的，以后可得小心，有旧作一首为证：

七律－烹蟹

大闸青红并帝皇，1 海河咸淡各留香。
花雕大蒜调佳馔，2 姜片生葱伴上汤。3
隔水清蒸原汁味，4 息炉慢浸嫩脂黄。5
荣华宠辱俱何念，此物生平最不忘。

1 大闸蟹，青蟹，红蟹和皇帝蟹 2 花雕蟹 3 姜葱蟹 4 清蒸蟹 5 浸蟹
2002/9/15

胡恢宗
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Posts: 564

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Posted: 2011-02-26 03:01:55 Post subject:

待到清霜偕酒日，金膏玉质胜芳腴。妙句。集描写与抒情如啸体。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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白水Collection

Posted: 2011-02-26 03:24:21 Post subject:

要流口水了

qinghongh
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Posted: 2011-02-26 04:51:47 Post subject:

形象生动，美味飘香。

黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2011-02-26 06:16:49 Post subject:

謝各位清賞！秋叶不愧烹蟹高手，何时能品尝你的厨艺，那就太有口福了！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

王君明
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Posted: 2011-02-26 06:44:15 Post subject:

待到清霜偕酒日金膏玉质胜芳腴想吃 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-26 07:19:35 Post subject:

君明，秋叶是烹蟹高手，何时到加，可一饱口福！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2011-02-26 08:03:44 Post subject:

黄兄，形象生动，极富生活情趣！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-26 09:54:46 Post subject:

谢白云兄评阅。练笔之作，请多批评指正。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2011-02-26 22:41:56 Post subject:

上次的贴子中，原是“集描写与抒情于一体”，怎么成了“啸体”，不知是那个环节上的失误。为此，特向黄老师道歉。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-02-27 09:27:16 Post subject:

"啸体”一说，正要请教释义，胡兄已做说明，谢谢！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

连南河
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Posted: 2011-02-27 11:31:25 Post subject:

下次聚会到秋叶家! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

笑聊
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Posted: 2011-03-01 02:46:55 Post subject:

问好黄老师！好热闹的咏蟹诗，咽口水。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-03-01 06:50:03 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊赏阅。问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-03-06 08:48:31 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

謝各位清賞！
...

谢黄老师谬赞，高手不敢当，班门弄斧尚可。

秋叶
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Posted: 2011-03-06 08:55:12 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

下次聚会到秋叶家!

连兄错爱了，寒舍岂能与我们上次聚会的豪宅相比，那“不是一个档次”，附旧作一首：

七律－回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆，岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散，大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处，歌吟动地啸苍穹。

寂，迹，泊－入声

白水
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Posted: 2011-03-06 09:22:29 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

连南河 wrote:

下次聚会到秋叶家!

连兄错爱了，寒舍岂能与我们上次聚会的豪宅相比，那“不是一个档次”，附旧作一首：
...

有螃蟹吃比什么都好，下周就去你家怎样？

秋叶
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Posts: 769

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Posted: 2011-03-06 19:51:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

连南河 wrote:

下次聚会到秋叶家!

连兄错爱了，寒舍岂能与我们上次聚会的豪宅相比，那“不是一个档次”，附旧作一首：
...

有螃蟹吃比什么都好，下周就去你家怎样？

还是到您的豪宅为好，那“不是一个档次”。

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