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山村•暮晚(三首)
蓝天李梦
童生


Joined: 12 Jun 2010
Posts: 29

蓝天李梦Collection
PostPosted: 2010-12-06 17:50:20    Post subject: 山村•暮晚(三首) Reply with quote

山村•暮晚(三首)

文/蓝天李梦

■山村•暮晚

说是太阳夹在两座大山之间
说是牧童扬起了炊烟的长鞭

说是山路在村口打了死结
说是乌鸦在岩崖练习嗓门

说是……其实就是一头
暮归的黄牛,胯下吊着一颗裸露的

阴囊。像日落;像钟摆
把山村摇进黑暗……
2010-12-6

■一场雪的到来

从对面
山上下来的那个人。身上的棉袄
被风
吹得鼓鼓的

那个黄昏时分下山的人啊
沿着河堤行走
一进村。就挨家挨户
敲门
像。有什么事即将发生……

声音是从柴棚那边传过来的
沙沙沙,沙沙沙
是谁。这么晚了还在搬弄柴火
脚步声越来越近
天越来越黑。冷啊——

清晨,孩子们都在欢呼
一个女人,从厨房泼出一盆刷锅水
地面冒起的一股白烟
仿佛。在
看不见的地下也有一堆火

天空。多么像
一只白瓷碗,倒扣着整个村庄……
2010-11-21

■履痕,在岁月中萌芽

时光,弥漫了村庄;风声,弥漫了老屋
我的身体,如
一面斑驳的土墙。潮湿,发霉
长满了细小的青苔

落日,敲开木门;木门,不停摇晃
一声“吱呀——”
又合上。村庄
长满了细小的耳朵

折叠的旧时光,长出了我的亲人
熟悉,而又陌生
记忆的河流,长出亲人的
故事,稻田,荒草,树木,鸟窝……
2010-10-4



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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2010-12-06 19:57:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗。很喜欢啊!!再写一些。问候诗人。
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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蓝天李梦
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 22:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!多批!
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唐慧
秀才


Joined: 01 Jul 2010
Posts: 187
Location: 中国吉林
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PostPosted: 2011-02-23 01:32:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常喜欢你的诗歌,自由、流畅。
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诗人是生命的歌手,灵魂的祭祀!
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2011-02-23 17:59:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景相融,欣赏这样的描述:

清晨,孩子们都在欢呼
一个女人,从厨房泼出一盆刷锅水
地面冒起的一股白烟
仿佛。在
看不见的地下也有一堆火
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